Death Of The Boogie

[Blayde]

Death Of The Boogie
By Blayde


Distant music is heard
Unlocatable--
Music of mood and spirit,
Distilled by a hidden affinity.

As music was born of sorrow,
Love was named a sister.

The chains of a legacy rust,
shackles crafted to bind the soul.
Now fall, giving birth to a new sound.

Rock Enter...

The blues and jazz have diminished,
People respond to anger not love.
But although the music is loud
It vents the despair from our hearts.

Bands like the Who and Queen
rise to the new age,
Engraving thier legend in stone.
A Bohemian Rhapsody?
Sung by an English band?
Few bohemians hear,
The Number 1 devoted to them.

And still the cycle continues,
Rock gives birth to metal.
Kids now walk around,
Blaring depression in thier ears
But I guess this era is apathetic,
to TRUE lyrics.



The Eternal Road of Rock & Roll

[Blayde]

Links

The Candle - Ebolorama
Maybe, I'm Crazy - Stock

[Spekz.]

This really could of been a lot better....

the nice little ode to rock etc was simple but not bad. it was written fairly well...it started off well, but then it lost that creativity n became quite obvious losing a sense of originality etc etc... I feel like ive read this before...but i also liked the last like 3 lines of the piece...so i liked the beginning stanza's and the end few lines...it was in between that where okly written and werent bad...just could of been better...

keep ups.

[Ebolorama]

I feel that you could have been more creative with this but what you did with it was all right. I felt like some part were just rushed. I was really into it until the "Rock Enter" part. I thought that you had a great word choice in the beginning and everything meshed well up there. For some reason i just wasn't feeling the rest that much.

RTF-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ts-383308.html

[Vince]

Bands like the Who and Queen
rise to the new age,
Engraving thier legend in stone.
A Bohemian Rhapsody?
Sung by an English band?
Few bohemians hear,
The Number 1 devoted to them.

I liked these lines alot and how you kinda gave us a little commentary on rock and some of its history....it reminded me that those bands at one time....were the pioneers of Rock...

I also liked how you talked about rock breeding types of nu-metal and stuff like that....This was fun to read and had good structure to it.....

I think this coulda used more imagery....coulda been a bit longer and you did have some spelling errors in there....

Peace and stay up....entertaining drop.
(cool pics too.)