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    Live: From The Newsroom




    FROM THE NEWSROOM


    It was news channel six, today this channel's sick
    Didn't take much to arouse anger and channel it
    Right now lets look at the set as a fresh book
    Lets not focus on the father, brother or son death took
    This dark depression sticks me with the best hooks
    There was this hot-shot journalist, unworthy shit
    I'm incensed by him though I know not who the person is
    I see this persona and go into a moral coma
    I turnout just to burnout, a breathing supernova
    I forget about my brother, the victim
    Listening to his last words and vision
    He wanted me to evolve and stop 'Crippin
    I cry tears and life's weird from now on
    I only feel I'm on Earth to die here
    Tried fear on for size, I'm so afraid to fly
    My brother died in a gang shooting, there was this reporter
    Judging the gang I'm part of, blaming us for the slaughter
    Transfixed by his translation of my brothers life....
    In contempt with the anchorman, "He's gonna die!!!"

    His name is Regis Crowder
    When I see him, I see a coward
    Its called projection, he's something
    I need to see devoured, he's a fake Jesus
    A second-rate Hermes, unworthy
    I feel thats he's out to hurt me
    Have me looked in prison for perjury
    His life is so unassertive and dirty
    His dirt heaps of facts come dirt cheap
    He never studied the gang or any of it codes
    Influenced by he say/she say logic exposed
    He couldn't tell us apart in plainclothes
    Readily he'll say that he knows the gang's clothes
    My little brother lay on the curb, shattered
    As dreams he might've had, none of it mattered
    Splattered by a rival gang he was just a gangbanger
    He was my flesh and blood, so much more than a gangster
    Wasn't the babyface Capone that'd they'd have you think
    Wasn't a young Gotti by any means, just a teen on the brink
    Of juvy or death, another homie gone...only a handful left

    So I went into the newsroom and shot him
    As the camera's rolled I got him
    Right between the eyes, hoping he dies
    He was gonna do another story on my gang
    Filled with thwarted propaganda and lies
    No remorse as the bullets pour out the gun
    He'll never know my hood or the war that I'm from
    He'll look at my world so, xenophobically
    I feel powerful now, Zen just flows through me
    I erased his intended fate wholly and totally
    So even in a botched after life he's owing me


    Police sirens blare outside, I didn't fight back
    I took Regis' life and surrendered just like that
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    Re: Live: From The Newsroom

    All, I have to say is.......

    I need the copy of this newspaper.... Hot shit.... Sick ass story.....Fuck the re-use on the words.. it was called for.

    You're a deep "mu'f**ka" you know that?

    The flow... of things is what got me hooked... the emotion is what caught my attention... the simple twist in the message is what got me to feed it.

    Hot shit fam..

    "Splattered by a rival gang he was just a gangbanger
    He was my flesh and blood, so much more than a gangster
    Wasn't the babyface Capone that'd they'd have you think
    Wasn't a young Gotti by any means, just a teen on the brink
    Of juvy or death, another homie gone...only a handful left

    So I went into the newsroom and shot him
    As the camera's rolled I got him
    Right between the eyes, hoping he dies
    He was gonna do another story on my gang
    Filled with thwarted propaganda and lies
    No remorse as the bullets pour out the gun
    He'll never know my hood or the war that I'm from
    He'll look at my world so, xenophobically
    I feel powerful now, Zen just flows through me
    I erased his intended fate wholly and totally
    So even in a botched after life he's owing me


    Police sirens blare outside, I didn't fight back
    I took Regis' life and surrendered just like that "

    My favorite lines... You were exposin this anchorman as a liar... lookin back though.. he was tryin to catch you as one as well. but in the end... you got your man.. and didn't lie about it... You got your revenge and he lost.

    Due to you goin to jail for bein honest with what you did... and not for fabrication.

    Keep doin your thing.

    8/10

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    Re: Live: From The Newsroom

    Mad! Really enjoyable read here, really unique. Nothing to be critical about. Flow was super crisp, vocab everything was top-notch. Absolute masterpiece

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    Re: Live: From The Newsroom

    upping for more feed since heads seem to really like this one.

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    Re: Live: From The Newsroom

    damn bro this was nicee. the flow was very smooth throughout i can say i couldnt find any flaws with it, just a smooth read. you had vivid imagery and details within this piece. i could visualize what was going on due to your vocab usage. rhymes were nice and multies too. overall cool shit, i liked the ending. my fav. part was...

    His name is Regis Crowder
    When I see him, I see a coward
    Its called projection, he's something
    I need to see devoured, he's a fake Jesus
    A second-rate Hermes, unworthy
    I feel thats he's out to hurt me
    Have me looked in prison for perjury
    His life is so unassertive and dirty

    that part was sick. overall good drop. return the feed on my new OM. peacee

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