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    Key to Success

    "Act in the valley so that you need not fear those who stand on the hill."
    ~Danish proverb









    Key To Success


    There's certain aspect of success that's rather hard to fathom
    regarding tactics one must implement to harvest a status
    the starting path is quite the opposite of popular teaching
    they say that knowledge is key? Naw, completely false...
    BELIEVE ME!!
    Cause see, the true catalyst of vast success
    rest, in fact, in one's ability to attract the masses
    or rather...one's ability to establish a status!
    To master this factor you must prepare a viable plan
    so it's vital to scan, and understand the science of man...

    Quite often, we tend to pride ourselves as creatures of logic
    but that's the problem...
    beneath our keenest reason and knowlege
    we're all just creatures of emotion; toting feelings and solace
    Cause that's our driving force; despite, of course, our lying retort
    we all have this dying desire to feel...HIGHLY IMPORTANT!
    in other words, ultimatley we're all selfish by nature!
    so to play on that principle is the trick of the major!
    let's take a 'for instance', as you fight your way to the top
    say you're dealing with customers, clients or facing the boss.
    survey your target; Display FALSE interest to create a rapport
    They won't care, i promise, they'll be too busy praising their lore

    Why???

    Well,
    here's an experiment, the next time you're in a conversation
    resist the urge to blabla about yourself; try switching the placement
    of focus from you to the person with whom you're speaking to
    Observe the results...and you'll find a most unyielding truth
    I won't disclose the outcome, but it's not a surprise
    and if done CORRECTLY...you'll even see a spark in their eyes
    see the logic is simple and the reason is normal and plain
    It's the same reason that when you read the mag....you scope for your name
    the same reason why 'Me' and 'I' are the most popular words
    the same reason why in group photos...we tend to opt ourselves first...
    in other words, ultimatley we're all selfish by nature!
    so to play on that principle is the trick of the major!

    SURE!!

    ...Some may call this mind manipulation, but i simply digress
    this is applying science to get by in life; a reasonable step...
    see i'm not the smartest guy nor am i the strongest in fact
    all i have are these principles to win this war of the masses...
    It's more than ass kissing, mind you, this is an art, for real!
    one is merely a pawn, the other's clearly a process of "Will"
    Cause I'm smart enough to know the key to success may dwell
    in knowing...
    that everybody's favorite subject is......SELF




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    Re: Key to Success

    This was really cool...It was very unique that you had a Danish proverb in there....Guess it was something you wouldn't usually see.

    Cause that's our driving force; despite, of course, our lying retort
    we all have this dying desire to feel...HIGHLY IMPORTANT!
    in other words, ultimatley we're all selfish by nature!
    so to play on that principle is the trick of the major!
    let's take a 'for instance', as you fight your way to the top
    say you're dealing with customers, clients or facing the boss.
    survey your target; Display FALSE interest to create a rapport
    They won't care, i promise, they'll be too busy praising their lore

    These lines had alot of humor and honesty in them...lolz...it was Humorsty.

    but yeah good mix of truth and hilarity....I think it was true what you were saying theres a science to it how we're selfish by nature....its not learned.

    Very deep piece and I feel like it was a social commentary of sorts.
    Very innovative and creative piece Tri....I love your writing and every piece is better than the other.
    I think my favorite piece of yours is the one about marriage tho.

    Pz and stay up....Sorry for the long feed.

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    Re: Key to Success

    ....Lol!

    All I can really say is... how fucking true. xD
    A great piece for gettin the heads talkin.

    I like the high dose of reality laid here.

    I can admit to this shit...."Dis Shit Right Here Nikka!" touched a lot of folks I'm sure..

    Keep it up.

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    Re: Key to Success

    i know it took me a little long to get back to you, but i thought this piece was dope, most multis were slick and laced the flow up. it read pretty quick at the beginning it seemed like a rebuttal to my old walls piece. still was pretty deep and the message overall seems to be a very true one at that, and you made some funny points on the way. good read
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    Re: Key to Success

    this was well put together, lyrical and truthful with relevant points, although the true message got a little lost in the somewhat vague poetic vibe, I still don't know what the key to success is, kissing ass? but for the most part this shit was on point.

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