Mathematical Rap

[The Genesis]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...03&postcount=7
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...25&postcount=4


[Genesis]
Ayo the graphical stats, of tactical mathematical rap
Is actual fact, not your average practical tracks
Gradually add and subtract, and guess the equation
The lesson's explainin' the explanation for the question I'm raisin'
Nothin' less than amazin, that every breath that I'm takin'
Is like a weapon that's aimed to proclaim the death of our nation
Smith & Wesson is blazin; step in the way 'n catch a stray
Spray the tech, I'll rain on any parade and festive occasion
Let's face it, I'm underrated and underestimated
Set the record straight I aint afraid to set it fuck a reputation
Aint no hesitation, leave you levitatin'
And elevated, like metaphysical meditation
Drama's lurking, I'm stirring up controversy
Diversity circles me, like a curse to adversity
Serve an eternity, the inferno’s burning internally
Burn to the third degree, man it's like a furnace enduring me
Surely alerting me, handle this emergency urgently
Verses is perfect, and every word I'm verbally murdering
Thoroughly inserting you surgically, it's a bad condition
When the gash incision, has your face missin' like the masked magician
I'm first class division, smarter than a math-matician
Track precision's hittin' harder than a head on crash collision
Every rap you kickin' is imaginary concepts
My context, has mad vocabulary content

[®andom]

I actually liked this.

Gradually add and subtract, and guess the equation
The lesson's explainin' the explanation for the question I'm raisin'
^that was dope

keep it comin.

[eduard p jones]

nice multi usage yo, i was diggin it.. the whole verse flowed well each line into the next line i like that,

Ayo the graphical stats, of tactical mathematical rap
Is actual fact, not your average practical tracks

the opener was good and then you followed with

Gradually add and subtract, and guess the equation
The lesson's explainin' the explanation for the question I'm raisin'

which i was diggin...

nice work yo, i'll be lookin out for other shit in the future...

props

[JUstintime]

good track it inda makes u think at the beginning reall good multis though man i liekd this piece a lot it was refreshing

hit me back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6716063

[Vincent Maestro]

Thoroughly inserting you surgically, it's a bad condition
When the gash incision, has your face missin' like the masked magician
I'm first class division, smarter than a math-matician
Track precision's hittin' harder than a head on crash collision

These were my favorite lines.....You had good multies and just a good overall rhymescheme man....very polished multies and flow. That was your strong point in this piece. I haven't seen much of your stuff but this wasn't that bad.
You need to work on telling a story with your pieces though.
Like stuff with that story-tellish vibe gets alot of attention on this site.

So I'd like to see you be a tad more creative....cool concept here tho.

Peace and stay up Gen.

[The Genesis]

^I got you...I have the story telling shit down as well, this verse is more demonstrating fundamental lyrical skill, but I'll drop some creative topical shit soon enough, thanks for the feed.

[Tactixx]

f-l-o-w.........nice....you word choice was good too...It didnt have to tell a story it all kinda just rolled off the tongue.....I liked it, it was an easy read with a nice complex rhyme scheme....good shit...

[The Genesis]

props for the feed.