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    Using My Illusion


    I'm going to use my illlusion with lucid afterthoughts
    While carriers of the reality virus hack and cough
    Modern philosophy is turning my brain to applesauce
    Deepak Chopra really thinks he's on to something
    Self-help?, self-help is use of uncontrolled substance
    For me this one's a must-win, limited air supply, sucked in
    Hold in the fumes from all my makeshift fantasies
    Not even Ayn Rand knows where this Anthem leads
    My extremist liberal stance, is one you can't receive
    At least not with open arms, I'm your daring friend
    Obviously caring but apparently reverse-Aryan
    No childhood filled with teenage mutant terrapins
    Just idolization of world-reknown terrorists
    Making plaques for Unabombers and school shooters
    A sing-along for the drugdealers and hopeless users
    Not a celebration of badness just an acknowledgement
    A celebration for the delinquent that became a college kid
    Leaves a life of juvy for acting school, moves up to
    Screenplays and Hollywood movies
    Drops the hoochies, hoodrats, and groupies
    This is an uplifting for anyone who feels like a failure
    Keep your smile, your head, and your tail up
    Fotune is random, it might just throw this dog a bone
    Just remember to use your illusion.



    Truth-A Story
    Just Give Him A Rope-Jonathan

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    Re: Using My Illusion

    upping for constructive criticism.

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    Re: Using My Illusion

    Dude you're so ill now lol, i love your word choice, good job at having that positive ending it had this real melodic upbeat thing going on with cunning subtle humor. the one thing i notice with you is you keep expanding your style. Good shit Sin.

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    Re: Using My Illusion

    Quote Originally Posted by Truth.. View Post
    Dude you're so ill now lol, i love your word choice, good job at having that positive ending it had this real melodic upbeat thing going on with cunning subtle humor. the one thing i notice with you is you keep expanding your style. Good shit Sin.
    Word....love it when readers pick up on my humorous side....its gratifying..."is that weird"...

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