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    However I Want It roux's Avatar
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    ventricle seized engine stalled

    gushing like oil or hot steam from fissure
    i am the well she, the wisher,
    coins leap from her fingers, spindles of lust long digits full of feeling
    and i have none...

    this composition my confession
    my omission and obsession, nightly purging session
    corruption in corpusles break bones tear muscles
    burn stem cells with devotion synapses set into new motion
    illiterate alliateration, emotion constipation
    petrarchian compensation not a new sensation
    salvation just assupmtion, ascention not withholding
    feet constricted on the ground
    stuck to ambulitory motion
    lumber through composure, explosion just a smolder
    shoulder to the boulder feels a whole lot older
    lungs filled to capacity god i wish it wasn't me
    but god hasn't listened since i fell into captivity
    nativity a memory this girl has got the best of me
    million fishes in the sea
    no help cause i'm an oddity, a mammal
    not aquadic, episodic she's erotic,
    expell what i extract replica exact, in fact
    sinew will contract and cause this heart to crack, broken heart smashed back original shape and left intact

    blue eyes left black holes inside my heart's walls
    new guys she takes home my romance my downfall
    corrupted heart strings feelings bring the strong sting
    so i sigh and go on that's what we are built for
    "Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
    -T. Armstrong

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    However I Want It roux's Avatar
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    uppin. feedback. no real romantics left i guess.
    "Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
    -T. Armstrong

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    this piece is gettin slept on like sealy posturepedic.
    "Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
    -T. Armstrong

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    Aiyo roux, you wuz madd at me over some of my rhymes, but i gotta give this up to you right here. This shit was hott, keep on wit tha good shit.
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    I liked this one alot.. at first it started out and you didn't yet know your topic.. then... it progressed to it. It was nice. OoNnEe

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    ^^ for more feed back, thanks angelic.
    "Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
    -T. Armstrong

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    ...powerful..

    ...a piece containing a strong use of vocab, complemented by a fair amount of vivid imagery....


    ...at times seemed to go up and down levels in an unusual and disrupting manner...but that was rare anyway...

    ...very good piece in my opinion....and hit kind of hard too...

    ....resp....
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    t/y!
    ^^
    "Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
    -T. Armstrong

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    ^^
    "Gangsters and hoods, criminals and thugs, some of my friends sell records, some of my friends sell drugs"
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