W2 Lightweight Title: Champ JayPana [1-0] VS Mind Theory [1-0]

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[Soul Theory]

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yo uh yi-yi-yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo yo uh yi-yi-yo chicka chicka chicka YO!



aight Jay Pana . . .

the best of luck, lets make it good . . .

[Jay Pana]

checkin in...

[Homer Phobic]

this is a battle i will be diff votin on and i dont wanna freepost so ill edit this to my vote once yall battle and check out mine against mind theory old oppenent mic check

[Soul Theory]

Originally posted by Jay Pana
Hiz Skill Iz Unheard Of Like Blind Midgetz Climbin Monkey Barz...
Him Beatin Me Iz Unlikely To Happen Like Paraplegicz Becoming Track Starz...

yo yo yo uh yi-yi-yo chicka chicka . . . Mic Check 1, 2, 1, 2 . . .


It's like bombing Iraqi muslims the way that I kill the wraps (raps)/
You contain wackness in your veins . . . plus you're a hemophiliac//
Your verses byte so much, that my computer can't hold 'em/
While my punchlines stay connecting waaay quicker then Cable Modems!//
It must have been a loooong fall when you dropped the bars that I quoted/ ^^^
Because that shit was soooo WACK, you must of been high as fuck when you wrote it!//
You got more bitch in you than bitches themselves . . . how can it be??/
My verse will lock you down with pressure, and make you frantically key//
You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/
You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// (win-those)
Jay Pana is the true definition of the American Fag/
My punches leave more stars circling your head then the American Flag!//
You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/
YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . //
I put you down so much, the grounds fed up, 'cause your rhymes are dirt cheap/
Sticks and stones may break my bones . . . but your words couldn't hurt fleas . . . //
I'll mash your rhymes like potatoes . . . with gravy on top . . ./
I'll even write this line in red, hoping that maybe you'll STOP//
My lines will leave you violated, it'll hurt worse then the dick/
You must digest your bars before you drop them, 'cause all ur verses are shit!!//
I'll fire punchlines that blind your sight . . . without looking/
The only time your verse is raw is when I eat it . . . without cooking//
No more kiddie games, either face the Truth-or-Dare to get hurt/
You know I'm ill, you're stalling like horses cause you're scared to spit first//
Thats aight, whether I spit first or second, you're filled with fear/
Your spit's like the creator of this league, because ya Skillz dissappeared!//
You claim you spit sick, but its more like you're choked with Ebola/
When it comes to winning battles, I'm "Always . . ." like Coca-Cola//



. . . sizzle . . .


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By the way, for the voters who failed English class, Hemophilia is a genetic disease in which the blood lacks the gene that controls clotting. So the when a hemophiliac starts bleeding it is almost impossible to stop because the blood doesn't harden to dry out to form a scab. Hemophiliacs are known to have died from blood loss from minor injuries such as nosebleeds and papercuts . . .





. . . aight ur turn to drop JAy Pana,
try to do it soon cause the sooner you drop the better voting we will get . . .



goodluck


EDIT:: I unitalicized Jay Pana and changed FAG to Fag due to kids claiming I was explaining a punch . . .

[Soul Theory]

this kid better not fucking no show on me . . . I'll cry . . .

[MiC ChEcK]

lightweight champ no showed ?...what an asshole.

[AuQ WuRD]

He's Not Gonna No Show......But I Believe It's A Chance U Will Get D.Q'ed Mind Theory Because U Made U'r Punches Stand Out.....If U Would Have Read The Rules.....It Clearly States That.........'

And Jay Is Gonna Murder U


-OuT-

[MiC ChEcK]

hes right mind..............

[Soul Theory]

i dont know what y'all are talking are talking about . . . the only lines that i could see that u could possibly be talking about is . . .

You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/
YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . //


I capped STANDABLE not to highlight a punch, but because Jay Panas name was under it, and I capped it at the end to show it was the same word.


I'll even write this line in red, hoping that maybe you'll STOP//

. . .I wrote this line in red cause thats what the line said. duh.



When it comes to winning battles, I'm "Always . . ." like Coca-Cola//


I quoted "Always . . ." because thats how it is on the cans . . .


No more kiddie games, either face the Truth-or-Dare to get hurt/


I dashed Truth-or-Dare because its a game, so all the words go together.





Explaining a punch would be where you quote or highlight two seperate words or groups of words to show that they have an inner meaning that relates them to each other . . . such as::

It's like bombing "Iraqi muslims" the way that I kill the "wraps"
or
While my punch"lines" stay "connecting" waaay "quicker" then "Cable Modems"!//


^^THAT would be explaing a punch . . . I didnt explain punches in my verse at all.












It probly wont matter seein how this kid is gonna no show on me.




. . . AND GET OFF MY DICK SYNIKAL

[Jay Pana]

here u go,

His Flow Iz Dumb And Simple Like Retardz Eating Instant Rice...
In Hiz Mind He'z Ill But In Theory He'z No Where Near Nice...
He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light...
Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight...
Hiz Versez Are Like Novelz, Long But Are Never Bestsellerz...
Hiz Audioz Put Me To Sleep, It'z Sad Cuz He Won't Get Any Better...
He Thinkz He'z Popular Cuz Hiz Battle Last Week Wuz Viewed Tha Most...
It Wuz Mainly Him, Tha Word Uppin Wuz More Than Half Of Tha Postz...
Hiz Flow Iz Intolerable, It'z Almost Like A Catastrophe...
Everytime I Listen To Him I Think I'm In A Tragedy...
LIke Neutral ATomz, Hiz Flow Never Producez Energy...
If Rankz Were Based On Wackness He'd Alwayz Be Ahead Of Me...
His Skill Iz Fake, It'z Nothing But An Act...
I Thought He Wuz Gangsta 'Til He Said Bustin Ninez Wuz A Math Fact...
He Claimz Hiz Versez Sizzle But It'z Still Getting Cold...
Hiz Punchez Are Like Burnt Out Candlez, They're Used And Old...
Hiz Chancez Are Diminished Like Tha End Of Hussein'z Reign...
Treat Him LIke Def Jam Did To Murder Inc., He'z Singin In Tha Rain...

if u don't understand anything don't vote. and don't vote cuz he has more linez than me. quality winz over quantity. start tha votez.

[G.Hod]

wow.. Quite one-side, despite the attempts of Jay's partners in crime to dig up dirt on MT's verse..

Mind Theory's Highlights:
"You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/
You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows// (win-those)"
NICE WORDPLAY, A RARITY THESE DAYS..

"You ain't STANDABLE, as my verses tear through flesh like a cannibal/
YO!! . . . ^Jay Pana^, you're wack kid . . . but that's under STANDABLE . . . // "
HA HA HA, COMICAL, MY BOY.. UNBELIEVABLE WORDPLAY AND PUNCH IN ONE.. PERHAPS THE TWO-LINER OF THIS FORUM SO FAR..

These were only a few of abundant examples of all devices of writing which clearly won the battle for you..

JayPana's Highlights:
"Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight..."
DECENT PUNCH, I IMAGINE..

"LIke Neutral ATomz, Hiz Flow Never Producez Energy...
If Rankz Were Based On Wackness He'd Alwayz Be Ahead Of Me..."
VERY GOOD, SHOWS INTELLIGENCE..


However, I think the size length (or lack thereof) of you piece did come back to JayPana, even though he doesn't want anybody to say it.. Mind Theory had more quality punches, a consistent flow, better multi's and captivating wordplay.. JayPana did take the vocabulary, though..

The creativity is what seperated the two.. Mind Theory's ideas were all new and fresh, as opposed to basic punchlines seen from Jay.. I look forward to reading more from both in the future.

VOTE: Mind Theory

[MiC ChEcK]

vote: mind theory


he had the punches and all that other shit down....i cant put a couple linesi n herre cause i liked em all.....


-mind i was wondering if you wanna join my new crew....

'ReStLeSS TaKtIkS'
members so far:
-me
-P.L.A.S.M.A

[flipninjah]

Good battle from both emcees

"You claim I'm chicken, but I'll smash your birdseed hen-flows with my info/
You act hard, but you're Microsoft, so in battles with you I Windows//
-Mind Theory
gud wordplay

He'z A Heavy Weight By Hiz Post Count But Hiz Punchez Are Light...
Walking Outside With Spandex Iz Tha Only Way He'd Come Out Tight...
-JayPana
simple punch but funny


How I saw it.

Punches: Jay it was close only reason ppl wud say it was Mind Theory cause of tha amount of lines he put out and Jays were more hard hittin in my view

Flow: Jay he kept it short and direct where as Mind Theory had it strecthed in order to put out tha punch

Complexity: Mind Theory coz he didnt need much use of similies to easily put out tha punch where in Jays part had a lot of like which was alright but so so

Creativity: Jay by a bit coz of how each new bar was a new idea Mind Theory mentioned some punches that were already brought in his verse

Enjoy: Jay though it was a simple lay out some of tha lines had me laughing.

Final Verdict= JayPana

no hate or d/r dats juss how I saw it much respect to both

[Jay Pana]

2-1 hiz way...uppin fo votez...

good verse mind. u had sum decent punchez even tho i've seen half of 'em before

i.e. tha microsoft line

also u did sorta make ur verse stand out...u used italicz, in tha rulez it said u can't use any of that wut so ever...u also put sum wordz in all capz, i'm not talkin bout that standable line eitha.

-No Trying To Make Punches Seem More Visible By Quoting, Bolding Or Underlining Them, That Is NOT Permitted.
(i.e) No Verse Like This ::

I`m "Ill" Like I Have A "Virus"

You Will Be DQ`d For That .

^there'z tha rule rite there

uppin...