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Good luck my dude.
12 Lines Minimum...
Max 20
''House rules''
Good luck my dude.
Cheeeeeeeckkkkkkkkk.............
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JAR!!! Im Dope!..Attractin Coke, Like politicans I ATTACK-THE-BROKE..
Yu ask for feedback & get props on a parady..Cos Ya RAPS-A-JOKE!!
Ya Aint TIGHT, Nobody feels wat yu write..Ya only dream YOUR NICE
sad tho, I'ma WEEDHEAD & Jars rec got more L's than I seen in my life!!
Im nice wit my knife, but i'm in love wit my mic..So FUCK Wat your VERBS-SAY..
..I..AM...GOiN..2..WIN...Its simple...JUST LIKE YOUR WORDPLAY!!
Fuck Wat This Bird say, I PEICE WORDS Like Legoblocks, Wins Come in Flocks
Last Time Jar ''Met-a-FOUR'' The dumb nigga found himself stuck in a leglock
Ima make ya moms ''Bed-rock'' so hard I got the flintstones Eye'n A Case
it'll be a bumpy ride Jar..especially when I run over the acne on ya face!
Jars a disgrace...Dumb fuck got 2 heaters...& he still couldnt Gun Clap..
now he trys to rhyme, So I keep him wit 'closed lips' like Nuns Flaps!
Its a done rap!..YU AINT PHAT!..Never that..So why even TEXT-IT?!
We read ya verse & it shows, Like lookin at the ribs of an Anorexic!!
This is a domestic, SONNIN IN Session, But I heard thas wat yu like?!
Im bitin Jars Flesh
.....So somebody tell this 'Holyfield' nigga to ''Drop The IRON MIC''
This dude's whole persona is lame, but shit..lets honor his name
He's too "BC" to make change out of a dollar-cents game
You too simple kid, wit any subject my form varies
So forgive me if I choose to wild out like the thornberries
Quit the funny business jack, cats get smacked tryna spark conflict
You on Gunz level? You're Nuts!..you makin my palm drip..
Black is less than an actor, a factor temporary and feeble
What's with this dude thinkin he's all scary and evil?
Acting like a marble genius..he's barely an easel!
I'm disectin whacky's very existence..a cesarean prequel
I'm of a greater breed so the swag make ya mouth foam
You still fallin for the same old traps like a mouse clone
JG be mastermindin the business, I determine the outcome
So even if I don't 'get my way' you won't hear a "how come"
Fuck the venue fuck the crowd and fuck blacky chan
Cause everywhere I'm at I get more props than an acme fan
We exchanged some punches in the cypher and I can tell you shallow
I commit lyrical crime, die, then bring hell thru battles
Yeah I holla'd at you, almost committed to bloodline
But dawg, yall ain't goin nowhere fast like a slug climb
Ayooo man
Good battle!!
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Up..............................................
Upppppppp........................
Originally Posted by BLACKY CHAN
This battle was very even, but not in a good way. I know both of you dudes and know both can come waay harder. Black seemed like he was going at Jar than Jar was at Blacky. However, the times that Jar was going directly at Black, his punches came riite. This was so even that it came down to each of ya'll have three standout bars. The fact that Jar had his best 4 lines all consecutively was enough to sway my vote in his direction by the slimmest of margins. I have a feeling this final verdict is coming down to the wire, though. V/Jar Gun.
Jar came harder so he gets the W. Black had a some decent concepts but his punches didn't hit as hard.
V/ J
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LOL
Uppin for REAL votes..........
JAR!!! Im Dope!..Attractin Coke, Like politicans I ATTACK-THE-BROKE..
Yu ask for feedback & get props on a parady..Cos Ya RAPS-A-JOKE!!
Ya Aint TIGHT, Nobody feels wat yu write..Ya only dream YOUR NICE
sad tho, I'ma WEEDHEAD & Jars rec got more L's than I seen in my life!!
Im nice wit my knife, but i'm in love wit my mic..So FUCK Wat your VERBS-SAY..
..I..AM...GOiN..2..WIN...Its simple...JUST LIKE YOUR WORDPLAY!!
Its a done rap!..YU AINT PHAT!..Never that..So why even TEXT-IT?!
We read ya verse & it shows, Like lookin at the ribs of an Anorexic!!
This is a domestic, SONNIN IN Session, But I heard thas wat yu like?!
Im bitin Jars Flesh
.....So somebody tell this 'Holyfield' nigga to ''Drop The IRON MIC''
Versus
Quit the funny business jack, cats get smacked tryna spark conflict
You on Gunz level? You're Nuts!..you makin my palm drip..
Acting like a marble genius..he's barely an easel!
I'm disectin whacky's very existence..a cesarean prequel
Mah Vote Goez 2 Blacky Chan Cuz He Used Punchlinez N Dissez Rite Thruout Hiz Verse N'd Jar Gunz Verse Waz Dope Buh He Uzed Alot Ov Self Glory N'd Fillerz
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