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    quick verse... kinda deep, kinda....

    lyrically I'm supposed to be the tightest, highest power.//
    but writings my dire shadow, cast by tha pure light of god's fire halo.//
    it's dark which sparks a brain-storm of way more than plain flow.//
    sane no-more, my mind's ignited like a volcano about ta blow.//
    heat like hell, parallel to the furance, parel for eternit.. y.// (y = ee)
    locked in with no hopes to turn this.. key.//
    stuck, luck. none.. fucked.. where to turn.. I got one word.. GUN.//
    load 8 weights one at a time in a verticle line.//
    cock back an' take aim on my face, it's not murda, it's suicide.//
    who am I.. where'd I go, I'm scared, desparity takes hold.//
    it's cold, clamy hands seem to ceize my soul.//
    freeze my bones as a shiver runs up my spine.//
    try'n hide, but still in plain site, pain steaks hard ta fight.//
    came for fame but left with less than I brang.//
    it ain't a thang just fucked up how tha world works this way....
    don't ya think.....
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    uppin' 4 sleeperz
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    THE IDEA WAS THERE JUST NEEDED SO BRUSHING UP
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Yeah, I agree with him^, I liked the flow though... had pretty good wordplay, and... well, maybe it's just me, but it's pretty short... you could have made it longer...
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    I was just bored...
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    yo blunt mc, it has a good idea you just gotta make it mo' clear but otherwise,its sick.
    Test me, I'll make you relate to many men, but consequences are tragic/
    your mom put ma cock in a Lakers' throwback, cuz she thought my Johnson was Magic/


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