The Warrior *The new Palamoon*

[Trey Songz]

The Warrior
[soundclick]6853285[/soundclick]

Download: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6853285

What you guys think?

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ne-376402.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-376291.html

[D. Josey]

This was pretty hot bro... I like the southern little riff... Somethin' sounded a little wrong in the notes, but everything was good... Your tag is annoying as hell lol, but the choir vst was tight though... The drums still stiff, and the snare sounded a little thin for this particular beat.. Your horns or w/e are cool though... Overall nice beat.

[Free Rob]

I like this. Sounds like something I would put together... But where you would rap at seems pretty plain. If I were you Id do something different to the beginning and the chorus part. Then place what you have for the chorus part as the regular verse placement.

[Trey Songz]

Thanks guys.

EDIT: Fixed the tag.

[II]

Listening...
The main string melody came out pretty nice.. The parts where you muted the strings at the verses were little boring, agree with free rob.. Id use other instruments there.. And a bassline would be pretty nice to hear... Other than that is pretty nice... Keep up

[Skorp-Eon]

the bass sounds sick on this this..just sounds like its missin something- dont ask me what, cuz idk, i dont make beats..just rape em..but overall its a sick beat

[Trey Songz]

Thanks guys.

[Trey Songz]

Bump

[10fingaz]

listening

diff shit from you...that first instrument could use some mixing,

should drop some pianos on this, for some more flavor, like maybe in the mid/mid high section like you'd find on some westcoast pianos.

this is ight though...I just think it could use just a bit more flavor
anyways stay up man

[KushGod]

this beat is alright
it needs more going on with it
i like the choir but the beat just sounds two empty
the drums is decent. coulda had more going on
but overall this is a decent beat just needs more sounds

[Trey Songz]

Maaaan.... this has 8 sounds including drums and bass. I use to get told to use less sounds. Now I do, and peeps say it needs more sounds. Someone help please.

*Looks at Kris* (Don't gotta leave feed, just need help solving that problem)

[D. Josey]

Why the hell did you delete all ur beats of your page... Wtf is wrong with u dogg

[Trey Songz]

^My old beats were whack maaaan! ('xcept for maybe a few, but kcuf it!)

[D. Josey]

I wanna here that native instruments beat

[BLACK FLAME]

Hmmm wonder what plug in you used for those vocals.... I think I already know LOL solid Haven't listened to one of your beats in a minute.