Credential (4) vs. Spekz (3)

[Mariah]

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[Cred]

Match first drop.

[Spekz.]

Sounds good,

Check

Good Luck.

[Spekz.]

wtf happened to you?

Aww how cute your buddy was concered - what a passionate dude!
But if ur so credible to RB – how come only ONE guy asked for you
Leave it to Mariah to pair us, doesn’t she know Im straight, damn
Spelling outright by killing r.e.d.i.b.l.e - so we can C you hang-man!
Im hardly a textcee, everybody knows im a poet – but ima still smash this
im no noob, just added fire; while you heat up – and conform to ashes!
New jr. heads now to clash fists, which explains why I’m jabbing air for free
Creds back in his prime?…
Most agreed your wack – while others just laughed hysterically!
Its fair to conclude im wasting my time on this fucking dead bitch
For this used homo’s status reads free – on this guy named craigs, list!

[Wordz AhGod.]

Aww how cute your buddy was concered - what a passionate dude!
But if ur so credible to RB – how come only ONE guy asked for you
Wording was terrible. Its requires more witt to make it more effective.
Leave it to Mariah to pair us, doesn’t she know Im straight, damn
Spelling outright by killing r.e.d.i.b.l.e - so we can C you hang-man!
Hang man punches IMO are played and the wording you used is really confusing. Write more clearly and people will get the punches. Just work on wording this line.
Im hardly a textcee, everybody knows im a poet – but ima still smash this
im no noob, just added fire; while you heat up – and conform to ashes!
wasn't feeling this line at all. Its all filler to me. Set up line was very irrelevent as well. The punch was I heat up and win, you heat up and turn to ashes I guess. You just have to find a better way to say this.

Change the rules hoe. If not fuck it, you goin hurt the same.
Coz if I match you, You'd probably burst to flames

I wrote that in one of my first battles back in like 04' 05'. Its simple as shit but still a good way to say what you want.
New jr. heads now to clash fists, which explains why I’m jabbing air for free
Creds back in his prime?…
Most agreed your wack – while others just laughed hysterically!
Wasnt' feeling this. Had a lot of potencial though. Just needed a better execution.
Its fair to conclude im wasting my time on this fucking dead bitch
For this used homo’s status reads free – on this guy named craigs, list
Hated this closer. Its wording was terrible as well. Wording can make or break your verse man. Try working on it or just go look at how the Vets are dropping a concept that you thought about. Look at the difference.

[Spekz.]

......i cant waste the heat on a guy thats not gonna show lol

[Spekz.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6571292

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-376110.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-376112.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...16-376108.html

[Mariah]

Spekz wins by no show (6)
Cred loses by no show (1)