Username (0) vs. Axeshun (0)

[Mariah]

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and 30 max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

[Axeshun]

Check...

[DGK]

check

[Axeshun]

idk if your HDVM, or just some bitch who wants to be like him
But your lines are blindly awful, which is why nobody ever recites them
It'd be a slight favor if I ended your life later with a light sabre
& only fags judge men right? it turns out User here is a certified gyrator
I don't blame u trying hard at this, but shit ur bars are stretched
& it really doesnt help...
Cuz ur lines are still hard to get & aren't even harsh or fresh
I can't bother but to ask, what makes you continue to journey?
Your lines so played & filler, nowadays they can prolly win you a tourney
You come with a style w/ little to offer so I really don't have to feed
Thats sme strategic shit, but still;
This is more one sided than the flex battle between Vas & Feebs

10.

[DGK]

fuckin wannabe... How RIval claimin he a G when ....
...he be named after a company...that makes kitchen aplliances?
^
http://www.rivalproducts.com/

slashed wid knives, smashed wid pipes, my tactics right,
cuz its easy to beat this PUSSY.. like when I fucked ur girl last night!
i'll slap this fag.. u rap like u on smack, dope, & crack,
i heard his crew pressed its own vinyl.. and called it "WACKS on WAX"
the only time u see props, is when i hang dis kid...
UPSIDE DOWN off a cliff,
....while u watchin us givin u thumbs down bitch!
..then i'll let go... . and u'll plummet to ur death quik,
wake up in the depths of hells abyss.. cuz ur names on the guest list!

[Deon]

roflz@ this shit

enjoy this league

[Axeshun]

I know its funny to you that 2 people have your aliases...but I was hoping I could have my name change already anyways...not to mention I had the name Rival since 05, which was before I knew about you

[DGK]

uppin

[Law.]

fuckin wannabe... How RIval claimin he a G when ....
...he be named after a company...that makes kitchen aplliances?
^
http://www.rivalproducts.com/

slashed wid knives, smashed wid pipes, my tactics right,
cuz its easy to beat this PUSSY.. like when I fucked ur girl last night!

Your best line but a madly played concept that wasn't delivered with any new fresh attempt.

VS.

It'd be a slight favor if I ended your life later with a light sabre
& only fags judge men right? it turns out User here is a certified gyrator

Rival, that gyrator line, is that meant to be as in guy rater? If so it doesn't seem to work as it is pronounced "Ji" rator.

Weak battle IMO. Vote Username I suppose?

[L-Tidus]

Hidden Content:

*Rival*
idk if your HDVM, or just some bitch who wants to be like him
But your lines are blindly awful, which is why nobody ever recites them
barely descent

It'd be a slight favor if I ended your life later with a light sabre
& only fags judge men right? it turns out User here is a certified

gyrator
Nice rhyme schema here

I don't blame u trying hard at this, but shit ur bars are stretched
& it really doesnt help...
Cuz ur lines are still hard to get & aren't even harsh or fresh
barely descent..didnt seem to hit very hard

I can't bother but to ask, what makes you continue to journey?
Your lines so played & filler, nowadays they can prolly win you a

tourney
barely descent

You come with a style w/ little to offer so I really don't have to feed
Thats sme strategic shit, but still;
This is more one sided than the flex battle between Vas & Feebs
descent closer


verses

*Username*
fuckin wannabe... How RIval claimin he a G when ....
...he be named after a company...that makes kitchen aplliances?
^
http://www.rivalproducts.com/
the ryhme scheme was a bit off, but still good opener


slashed wid knives, smashed wid pipes, my tactics right,
cuz its easy to beat this PUSSY.. like when I fucked ur girl last

night!
descent

i'll slap this fag.. u rap like u on smack, dope, & crack,
i heard his crew pressed its own vinyl.. and called it "WACKS on WAX"
LOL

the only time u see props, is when i hang dis kid...
UPSIDE DOWN off a cliff,
....while u watchin us givin u thumbs down bitch!
ohh man..this was cool, the last line did it


..then i'll let go... . and u'll plummet to ur death quik,
wake up in the depths of hells abyss.. cuz ur names on the guest list!
descent


^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

This was a pretty good battle here. Rival came alright, but had some line that did not connect very well. His verse was descent though. Username had some stuff that made me smile with the level of intensity on a couple of his disses.


Vote - Username, better punches

[DGK]

uppin

[Deon]

nah, rival was one of my alias' but username is a totally different person.

same crew, two different people.

[Mack.]

idk if your HDVM, or just some bitch who wants to be like him
But your lines are blindly awful, which is why nobody ever recites them
playd
It'd be a slight favor if I ended your life later with a light sabre
& only fags judge men right? it turns out User here is a certified gyrator
no
I don't blame u trying hard at this, but shit ur bars are stretched
& it really doesnt help...
Cuz ur lines are still hard to get & aren't even harsh or fresh
decent
I can't bother but to ask, what makes you continue to journey?
Your lines so played & filler, nowadays they can prolly win you a tourney
no
You come with a style w/ little to offer so I really don't have to feed
Thats sme strategic shit, but still;
This is more one sided than the flex battle between Vas & Feebs
no


vs


fuckin wannabe... How RIval claimin he a G when ....
...he be named after a company...that makes kitchen aplliances?
Not harsh at all
slashed wid knives, smashed wid pipes, my tactics right,
cuz its easy to beat this PUSSY.. like when I fucked ur girl last night!
no
i'll slap this fag.. u rap like u on smack, dope, & crack,
i heard his crew pressed its own vinyl.. and called it "WACKS on WAX"
no
the only time u see props, is when i hang dis kid...
UPSIDE DOWN off a cliff,
....while u watchin us givin u thumbs down bitch!
Playd and worded horribly
..then i'll let go... . and u'll plummet to ur death quik,
wake up in the depths of hells abyss.. cuz ur names on the guest list!
no


Vote-Rival

[.Bullet.]

I don't blame u trying hard at this, but shit ur bars are stretched
& it really doesnt help...
Cuz ur lines are still hard to get & aren't even harsh or fresh

vs

i'll slap this fag.. u rap like u on smack, dope, & crack,
i heard his crew pressed its own vinyl.. and called it "WACKS on WAX"


overall somewhat even, but wow fuckin matix with his funny line that i quoted did it for me.

v-matix.

[Nemesis.]

I don't blame u trying hard at this, but shit ur bars are stretched
& it really doesnt help...
Cuz ur lines are still hard to get & aren't even harsh or fresh

vs

nothign..this was a weak battle..wtf, I thought Axeshun was much better than this..maybe he didn't try..username you just came weakkk..an wording was horrible, an concepts sucked, axe came played but had better wording an that one line of his stood out


v/actionnn