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    "Revelations"

    This is one of those beats you just vent about how fucked up the world is, heres the link:
    http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6765508

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ee-374485.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-371840.html
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    Re: "Revelations"

    it's actually kinda tight... the piano sounds cheap and cold, pretty generic... but the overall beat ain't bad... rather than single notes in the piano melody, I think chords would sound better... that's my only knock on this beat is the piano... otherwise, good work...


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    Re: "Revelations"

    ^ Thanks. Yea the sounds in FL Studio are kinda weak in my opinion. No matter how much mastering and mixing you do it always seems to kinda have that "Fruity Loops stamp" on it. I'm in the process of upgrading to Reason so hopefully I'll be able to clean things up and make it sound a little more crisp
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    Re: "Revelations"

    uppin
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    Re: "Revelations"

    uppin for opinions
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    uppin once again, dont be a dickhead, if your gonna open it, listen to it an comment
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    Re: "Revelations"

    If you want feed, use soundclick embedded player.

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    Re: "Revelations"

    This was ok man was feeling thanks for the listen..

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    Re: "Revelations"

    I've fed on everyone so I'll click the link, lol. Alright, you need to get your hands on a better vsti that produces better piano keys. Same with choir. I wasn't really feeling the melody. It was kinda corny for me. You sound new at this so it's all good. Just keep at it and you'll see progress.

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