HW Title: $pitacular(15) vs. Warming(10)

[Vaskez]

Make sure you've read the rules as they will be enforced.

Checkin due Wed 23.59 EST (late/no checkin = -2 votes)
Verses due Fri 23.59 EST (lateness = -2 votes even if your opponent agrees the extension)

Line limit: 14 MIN, NO MAX

Must vote on FIVE battles (we will check that they are proper votes: -2 votes per missing vote)

Voters: if this battle is season 9 classic worthy, nominate it in the correct thread in the office. Also keep an eye out for dope punches for the highlight reel, thanks.

all other rules linked above

note: due to Jay (contendor) signing out, the next highest rank who didnt get a shot, is getting the title shot

[Warming]

let's go 24 or so

[$pitacular]

at this rate season 9's going to be me getting verse of the week every week and no worthy battles getting nominated at all

You better come nice warming. Going 24's a mistake for you, but OK.


Check.

[$pitacular]

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
You ain't cool faggot. Nobody likes you. don't even get props on your writes
Your last verse was a 5.5, which is more skins than you ever got in ya life
I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
I'll smash a G. Fuck with me? after I swear you would never be normal
you'll be such a casualty.. I couldn't wear you out to anything formal
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
fuck ya skills bitch.. even at ya best I leave you with crazy broke bones
trust me homie... I'll fuck your Prime up like a shady home loan
why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it
The heat is poured. I'm showin off. my swag's hurtin ya leave you tore
Bitch when I showcase... it'll be the 1st degree murder I beat in court
won't stick it to me. the weak punches you throw makes me sickened truly
I'll rip your arm off. n' leave you named Wing like a chicken should be
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me



30.

[Warming]

homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill
bitch hand over the title, we can't remember you rhyming dope
fuck bringing us back, these days spit can't even find times to vote
when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones
sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother
i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop
you can't handle the heat ho, i'll melt a dork for his weak flow
spit doesn't need air conditioning.. he just needs to work up to that ego
downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers
throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played
we gave u the belt so you'd hang, now i'll use it reign lashes and welts a plenty
i don't even feel sorry fanning the flames.. when yours are in hell already
spit's known to roll with the punches, i'll leave him tattered by midpage
cuz living for the spur of the moment just means my boot's gonna shatter his ribcage
you'll never champ this league while its whole so learn to fathom your role
you never got over smoke so you'll keep getting dragged through the coals
faggot im bold, on my soul shut your pipe when im spitting
your girl won't even have anything to remember you by til i slice you to ribbons
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

Hidden Content:

throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played
spit's known to roll with the punches, i'll leave him tattered by midpage
cuz living for the spur of the moment just means my boot's gonna shatter his ribcage
you'll never champ this league while its whole so learn to fathom your role
you never got over smoke so you'll keep getting dragged through the coals

vs

I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
I'll smash a G. Fuck with me? after I swear you would never be normal
you'll be such a casualty.. I couldn't wear you out to anything formal
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
won't stick it to me. the weak punches you throw makes me sickened truly
I'll rip your arm off. n' leave you named Wing like a chicken should be
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me


wowww.. this was pretty one-sided. Warming came with his usualy, 2-3 good punches, but went too many lines for it to average out to a good verse. $pit pretty much dropped his whole verse quotables.. best verse i've seen all season. even lines that weren't quoted were witty and harsh. The "wing/chicken" punch was creative as fuck, my fav. of the battle. Warming came stretched in some areas as well.. i don't kno what it is about him, but his punches come off bland, and not very effective, culd just be me, idk. but..

v/ spit

[Born To Kill]

Really nice battle guys...

Spit
I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
Nice opener...good hit, not amazing, but good...6.5/10
You ain't cool faggot. Nobody likes you. don't even get props on your writes
Your last verse was a 5.5, which is more skins than you ever got in ya life
Cool-ish...kinda off though...I mean, last verse got him here...6.0/10
I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
Coulda been harder, but nice and creative...7.0/10
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
Clever...but kinda the same as your opener...6.0/10
I'll smash a G. Fuck with me? after I swear you would never be normal
you'll be such a casualty.. I couldn't wear you out to anything formal
You dating him? Wording...I see what ya saying, but it's a hair off...5.5/10
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
Eh...didn't care for this much...3.5/10
fuck ya skills bitch.. even at ya best I leave you with crazy broke bones
trust me homie... I'll fuck your Prime up like a shady home loan
Kinda eh again...4.5/10
why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)
This was clever...almost cute though...hate to use that word...6.5/10
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
Really liked this one...8.5/10
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
Ok, kinda cool...not loving it, but aight...6.0/10
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it
Nice...a bit too direct, obvious wit, but still effective...7.5/10
The heat is poured. I'm showin off. my swag's hurtin ya leave you tore
Bitch when I showcase... it'll be the 1st degree murder I beat in court
Seen this kinda shit alot...eh...5.5/10
won't stick it to me. the weak punches you throw makes me sickened truly
I'll rip your arm off. n' leave you named Wing like a chicken should be
Eh again...not liking this one...4.5/10
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me
Ya'll fuck the same? Same dick size? Goodish, but open to misinterpretation...6.0/10

Sorry...with so many lines, to be fair-ish...I thought I'd do a numbers system to keep track of shit. 83.5 Total

Warming
homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill
Played concept, but really nicely flipped...7.5/10
bitch hand over the title, we can't remember you rhyming dope
fuck bringing us back, these days spit can't even find times to vote
Blah...saying he doesn't vote isn't an effective diss...2.0/10
when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
Ouch...hardest hit so far in this battle...9.0/10
who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones
Very clever...good hit on Spit's use of old shit...however, that was a bit back...kinda going into the archives for this...points off for ancient shit...5.5/10
sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother
Whatever...kinda blah...3.5/10
i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop
Funny visual...very nice...coulda even been meaner if you'd made HIM the bellhop, like thats his career...but still nice...7.5/10
you can't handle the heat ho, i'll melt a dork for his weak flow
spit doesn't need air conditioning.. he just needs to work up to that ego
Not sure about this one...it confuses me...3.5/10
downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers
Funny again...gross on the gayness...but funny...6.5/10
throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played
Touched on this already...but ok-ish...5.5/10
we gave u the belt so you'd hang, now i'll use it reign lashes and welts a plenty
i don't even feel sorry fanning the flames.. when yours are in hell already
Ok-ish...again, a bit peculiar...5.0/10
spit's known to roll with the punches, i'll leave him tattered by midpage
cuz living for the spur of the moment just means my boot's gonna shatter his ribcage
Cool-ish...needed better direction...it coulda been mint...7.0/10
you'll never champ this league while its whole so learn to fathom your role
you never got over smoke so you'll keep getting dragged through the coals
He's beaten Smoke, no? Of course he has...5.0/10
faggot im bold, on my soul shut your pipe when im spitting
your girl won't even have anything to remember you by til i slice you to ribbons
Eh...ya slipping, dude...5.0/10
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink
Hahahahaha! Maybe this is best of battle...9.5/10
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test
Ok-ish...kinda reaching...6.0/10

Ya started off hot, but I notice you ran outta gas towards the end...
Still you had the two best punches of the battle...it'll be close...88 Total.

It was those two punches that made the difference...three, actually..."bellhop" made me laugh.
Very nice hits.

Vote: Warming

[Horud Skys]

homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill
when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones
i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop
spit's known to roll with the punches, i'll leave him tattered by midpage
cuz living for the spur of the moment just means my boot's gonna shatter his ribcage
you'll never champ this league while its whole so learn to fathom your role
you never got over smoke so you'll keep getting dragged through the coals
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
I'll smash a G. Fuck with me? after I swear you would never be normal
you'll be such a casualty.. I couldn't wear you out to anything formal
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
The heat is poured. I'm showin off. my swag's hurtin ya leave you tore
Bitch when I showcase... it'll be the 1st degree murder I beat in court
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me

Vote s[it easy batt;e i think

[Cody Nash]

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
You ain't cool faggot. Nobody likes you. don't even get props on your writes
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it
^^all of this was just wow... this last line especially...


vs


homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill
sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother
lol...
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test
^^these lines were coo... didn't like a lot of your other shit... mediocre at best...



yeah...
it was an okay battle but from where I'm standing, obviously it was a really one sided one... $pit had some funny fuckin' punches, but the only one I really enjoyed of warmings as much as any of $pits was the splitting his mom punch... other than that I wasn't too into it... that dream punch from $pitacular crushed warmings whole verse imo....



vote $pitacular...

[Automatic.]

I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it


vs.

homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill
when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers
throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test

Aww man, i got this tied in quotables. I gotta say though, there was a lot of Spit's that bordered on getting quoted and not so much in warming's.. but damn this kid is good. warming, u dropped a lot of played cliches, but you had pretty decent flips on the majority of them so it's alright but they will cost you when you get to the more experienced voters. spit, nice verse. you kept with the usual consistency and took this one imo.

v/ spit

[Attack of the Muff]

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
(heh ok)
You ain't cool faggot. Nobody likes you. don't even get props on your writes
Your last verse was a 5.5, which is more skins than you ever got in ya life
(ok)
I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
(heh)
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
(lol..like this)
I'll smash a G. Fuck with me? after I swear you would never be normal
you'll be such a casualty.. I couldn't wear you out to anything formal
(played)
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
(funny lol..but wordin was off)
fuck ya skills bitch.. even at ya best I leave you with crazy broke bones
trust me homie... I'll fuck your Prime up like a shady home loan
(ok)
why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)
(heh)
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
(nice)
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
(nice)
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it
(ok)
The heat is poured. I'm showin off. my swag's hurtin ya leave you tore
Bitch when I showcase... it'll be the 1st degree murder I beat in court
(ok)
won't stick it to me. the weak punches you throw makes me sickened truly
I'll rip your arm off. n' leave you named Wing like a chicken should be
(nah)
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me
(ok close)

solid verse..few misses..feeling resting in peace..the feeble shit...etc..almost whole verse was above average...alot of ok lines as well


homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill
(cool flip)
bitch hand over the title, we can't remember you rhyming dope
fuck bringing us back, these days spit can't even find times to vote
(eh)
when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
(ok)
who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones
(eh ok)
sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother
(eh ok)
i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop
(heh slick but the concept is weak..win in the bag...i mean..yea i got u tho)
you can't handle the heat ho, i'll melt a dork for his weak flow
spit doesn't need air conditioning.. he just needs to work up to that ego
(lol..i like this)
downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers
(nice)
throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played
(reaccccccccchin)
we gave u the belt so you'd hang, now i'll use it reign lashes and welts a plenty
i don't even feel sorry fanning the flames.. when yours are in hell already
(ok)
spit's known to roll with the punches, i'll leave him tattered by midpage
cuz living for the spur of the moment just means my boot's gonna shatter his ribcage
(played concept)
you'll never champ this league while its whole so learn to fathom your role
you never got over smoke so you'll keep getting dragged through the coals
(ok)
faggot im bold, on my soul shut your pipe when im spitting
your girl won't even have anything to remember you by til i slice you to ribbons
(damn came off horrorcore type raw shit nice herr)
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink
(eh ok)
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test
(nah)



pretty good verse..some real nice ones..like the ribbons..pushin buttons..work up to the ego etc but some misses with the spur of the moment playedness..the closer which was played n poorly executed.. good verse overall


i got spit takin this

much more consistent in my eyes (look @ breakdown)

v/spitacular

[Vaskez]

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
^^lol, clownage
I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me
^^haha, good flip

vs.

when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones
sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother
^^hah
i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop
you can't handle the heat ho, i'll melt a dork for his weak flow
spit doesn't need air conditioning.. he just needs to work up to that ego
downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers
^^lol
throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played
^^WOAH at the stretchedness, this needed rewording, good concept tho
faggot im bold, on my soul shut your pipe when im spitting
your girl won't even have anything to remember you by til i slice you to ribbons
you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test
^^clever

quoted everything I didnt dislike

hmm this is really hard to vote on cos while Spit's most clowning punches clowned warming more, there were more from Spit that I just didnt like at all. In the end I think warming edged it on consistency

v/warming

good battle

[Mariah]

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence
I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness
observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks
Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year
mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week
ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace
look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it
fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me

vs.

when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit
who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones
sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother
i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop
you can't handle the heat ho, i'll melt a dork for his weak flow
spit doesn't need air conditioning.. he just needs to work up to that ego
downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers
faggot im bold, on my soul shut your pipe when im spitting
your girl won't even have anything to remember you by til i slice you to ribbons
you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test

Minus a few stretched lines, I liked a lot of Warming's verse. Most of his hard hitters were personal, but I liked the closer a lot. He made this match close - and actually hard to vote on, which I didn't expect was going to be the case, especially after how good of a verse Spit dropped - I couldn't see it happening. Spit dropped really well too, I was digging that "total coincidence" punch, had me laughing and shit...plus some other hard hitters and some good flips. It came down to consistency for me and although I have it tied in quotables, I think that Spit's verse had less that I didn't like, though it was close. Nice battle, both of you, but i had to pick a winner. Peace.

v/Spit

[Deon]

I'm wreckin you easy chump. If I'm grinnin it's cuz I know I'll be winnin this
but being second don't mean you suck.. that shits just a total coincidence

solid open

You ain't cool faggot. Nobody likes you. don't even get props on your writes
Your last verse was a 5.5, which is more skins than you ever got in ya life

nah, didnt develop well enough


I'm like the Emperor of text. You couldn't be savage like me with practice
got Ming in your name... n' can only manage a dynasty of wackness

straight, i had a similar concept against him before

observe the tough. shut ya trap bitch. I flow rap servin chumps
n' I don't know who you think you are.. all I know is that person sucks

lol, cool

I'll smash a G. Fuck with me? after I swear you would never be normal
you'll be such a casualty.. I couldn't wear you out to anything formal

nah, been done

Don't fight me, run in fear. ain't jokin the whole site see's you're a queer
cuz it's warming on my dick, like I been strokin at light speed for a year

nah, didnt execute this very well. came off corny

fuck ya skills bitch.. even at ya best I leave you with crazy broke bones
trust me homie... I'll fuck your Prime up like a shady home loan

nah not feeling this either

why even try? kid ya toasted. man you shouldn't be sore I'm boastin
there was a chance you coulda won. (I just didn't die before I posted)

pretty nice

mine's that heavy speech. most of the leagues weak.. n' me I'm in my peak
but fuck facing Feeble.. evidently I'm facing all kinds of it every week

harsh

ain't impressin me see.. ya fury can't contend with testing the heat
your name starts with War.. no worries it ends with resting in peace

straight

look homie.. get over it. it's just a battle I'm only mean for minutes
I swear I just came to crush ya skull. I didn't even know your dreams were in it

nah., not feeling this really

The heat is poured. I'm showin off. my swag's hurtin ya leave you tore
Bitch when I showcase... it'll be the 1st degree murder I beat in court

nah, didnt connect right.

won't stick it to me. the weak punches you throw makes me sickened truly
I'll rip your arm off. n' leave you named Wing like a chicken should be

fuck what everybody else say, this was tight

fuck a rank. you rep the bottom. crushin ya spine's a fuckin breeze
n' you'll never be on top.. ya girl says it reminds her too much of me

haha, nice close

overall about 8 lines struck me as bad here, rest was solid/pretty nice

good showing spit

vs


homie give it a rest, quit pretending your vital
i started to read your last verse and kicked my dependence on nightquill

eh, didnt do much for me

bitch hand over the title, we can't remember you rhyming dope
fuck bringing us back, these days spit can't even find times to vote

same as above

when i step up you need to quit, its too easy to beat you kid,
but walking over you sure is unpleasant, phly doing it confirmed you're a piece of shit

solid personal

who's known as a cheating prick, i come correct so fuck a run at my throne
this geeks sigging star wars.. mostly cuz he'll never be done with the clones

eh, wasnt direct enough really 'who are the clones?

sadly we're more alike than you know, for real spit you'll get smothered
see you're being reborn and i'm still splitting your mother

lol, this was funny..coulda developed it a bit more, but funny

i'm the most lethal discovered, killing your buzz when the Ls drop
only time you'd have this win in the bag is mugging my bellhop

nah, win in the bag? noo

you can't handle the heat ho, i'll melt a dork for his weak flow
spit doesn't need air conditioning.. he just needs to work up to that ego

nice line actually

downing this square like stratego, thinks he's feared cuz we're acting bothered
he was bound to push some buttons.. before being told not to grab our boxers

eh

throwing jabs til i top yours, it'll get this ass bitching for days
you'd think i knocked him back to the season 7 finals cuz his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played

stretched.

you'd think it was season 7's final how his typical disqualifies as wack, bitten or played

the concept is ok, kinda played, but u stretched the wording beyond reason

we gave u the belt so you'd hang, now i'll use it reign lashes and welts a plenty
i don't even feel sorry fanning the flames.. when yours are in hell already


not feeling

spit's known to roll with the punches, i'll leave him tattered by midpage
cuz living for the spur of the moment just means my boot's gonna shatter his ribcage

ok flip on spur of the moment

you'll never champ this league while its whole so learn to fathom your role
you never got over smoke so you'll keep getting dragged through the coals

this was cool, but hes beat smoke if im not mistaken, worded nicely tho

faggot im bold, on my soul shut your pipe when im spitting
your girl won't even have anything to remember you by til i slice you to ribbons

nah, not good.

you're unmanned by your woman, her and the drivel your pen inks
she's got you so whipped you're seeing two kinds of head shrink

ok, but not powerful


you ain't got a hope without cheating, i'm smashing this dumb pest
i mean even when cats think you dropped dope they still ask for a blood test

eh


overall a lot of this was poorly done, some concepts didnt meet potential there were quite a few that shoulda never made it to the final cut.

i know this vote wont count, but i felt like breaking down the champ match and by my comparison, spit won this pretty easily..

[Vaskez]

actually hotdog you're good enough to be an external voter and an LLL vet so I'll add you to the external voters list