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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    Text is my Life

    And no, this isn't a diss piece before people start going apeshit.




    Text is my Life

    What's the title for this? Ummm... 16 line free
    Yeah, that'll help me stand out, no? Time for plan B
    I'm getting so worked up, i hope my text's ill
    If i got negative feedback, i'd stab myself with my pencil
    Let me attack this keyboard and reap the rewards
    Slam keys back and forth like a kiddie's seesaw
    Oh shit, you mean there's rules here? Let me peep that
    Here's my links moderators, 2 lines of feedback

    Yeah, dis waz hot dog, nah whut i mean?
    You had some hott linez, you rilly set up the scene
    Ok, i'm set up, all i need is a subject not piss weak
    I got it! Here it comes boys, a fucking diss piece
    God, this is serious business, but now who's dissing me?
    What do these people know? I take this LITERALLY
    Wake at 6am, to write some sick events, stomp on lads

    "Oh please Jesus! Just let me be featured in the mag!
    Oh just one nomination! Justify my childhood!"


    Let me bite an older vet's style to make my style good
    These people don't understand, it's better than sex with my wife
    (Well... if i had a wife) But i don't need one, TEXT IS MY LIFE
    And maybe one day the hip-hop world will understand
    Have me on the source cover with a pen in my hand
    But for now and every day, at this desk before bed
    I'll keep typing my rhymes and wiping my forehead



    **bows**

    I thank you.





    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ys-374312.html

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ng-373563.html
    Last edited by Johnny 6-feet; August 5th, 2008 at 10:35 AM

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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    Re: Text is my Life

    **boots thread up**

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    Re: Text is my Life

    lol...The last bit is funny.
    haha, dont know to say on a piece like this. Funny, witty, filled with shit that makes fun of people. Ya, good drop, lol

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    Re: Text is my Life

    not gonna lie, this was pretty cool.
    I mean, it was topical - but it wasn't at the same time
    kind of like you were dissing the disses that are going on
    but you really weren't you just used it as a topic to write to

    pretty dope, I liked the line with the quote of how everyone
    feeds on real drops just to get a link. chuckled at that
    it was nice man, good shit.
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    Re: Text is my Life

    These people don't understand, it's better than sex with my wife
    (Well... if i had a wife) But i don't need one, TEXT IS MY LIFE
    lol

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    Re: Text is my Life

    Good shit.. I was laughing my ass off when it came to that "TEXT IS MY LIFE" bar. Kinda simple rhyme scheme but you stuck with the multi's.. They really brought this piece together. Overall it was solid.. The flow was pretty dope. Played subject but still executed nicely.. Well written. Thanks for the read.. Much props.

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    Re: Text is my Life

    This was pretty funny. I whish the rhymes were a little better, but still nice, especially considering what's been going on in OM.
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    Re: Text is my Life

    this was a pretty witty piece. gotta say, good observation on the topic, never seen it put like this lol.

    Oh shit, you mean there's rules here? Let me peep that
    Here's my links moderators, 2 lines of feedback
    Yeah, dis waz hot dog, nah whut i mean?
    You had some hott linez, you rilly set up the scene

    ^ lol, i liked this bit a lot. but overall yeah, nice drop man.

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    Re: Text is my Life

    this was a pretty witty piece. gotta say, good observation on the topic, never seen it put like this lol.

    Oh shit, you mean there's rules here? Let me peep that
    Here's my links moderators, 2 lines of feedback
    Yeah, dis waz hot dog, nah whut i mean?
    You had some hott linez, you rilly set up the scene

    ^ lol, i liked this bit a lot. but overall yeah, nice drop man.

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    Re: Text is my Life

    LMAO!

    good shit J6ft.
    good flow and was commical.
    I like that about your writings, they can be serious...
    yet you can have a humorous side.

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    Re: Text is my Life

    Booting this up once, leave links, i'll rtf.

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