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Thread: Enough With The Small Talk

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    Enough With The Small Talk

    See OM has turned into a nightmare, but a foes dream
    So I come in with no scheme, and a half bottle of codeine
    Its basically becoming like the industry, apparently
    Its pretty cheap, peeps make fake beef for popularity
    My last gear kicks in- I pitch in like Danny Glover at a charity
    So I'd like to thank god for grantin' me this moment of clarity
    I write disparity, cuz I'm out to make more bread than Sara Lee
    Sorry but the hunger is stronger than Kanye, on graduation
    Which is why I'm on the come up like vertical ejaculation
    Droppin' so much English at once you'd think the dude was bilingual
    I got the flow to shut down your comp, like the Bermuda triangle
    Cats lying worse than Jerry Springer, when they reveal their a guy
    Like the dude smashin' didn't see the sac when he hit it from behind
    You can't try because every line you spit is a damn lie
    Telling faggot stories like,
    .....Everlasting Tuck drinking water so he can't die
    Let the truth be known, the booth be cold before I walk in it
    Your styles bogus as Shaq shoes tryna make a model thats authentic
    I spit off the dome to clear thoughts and relieve pressure
    I speak better than B.Heat and Nique squeezed together
    And literally kill the joker like IJL members, impersonating Heath Ledger
    A few tweaks a week, and some treachery might keep ya beef fresher
    Since dudes on this site arguing back and fourth like two brothers
    Producing wack shit aint attractive, Black startin to show his true colors




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    Re: Enough With The Small Talk

    "See OM has turned into a nightmare, but a foes dream
    So I come in with no scheme, and a half bottle of codeine
    Its basically becoming like the industry, apparently
    Its pretty cheap, peeps make fake beef for popularity"

    Liked this bit very capturing, made me really wanna read this peice.
    This was a dope drop man, had good vocab and rhyme scheme, and flow stayed on point for most of it, or maybe all of it, it just seemed it faded off cause some of your lines seemed strected.
    But overall it was good man. 9/10.
    Return the deed to "My Mother" please.

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    Re: Enough With The Small Talk

    I like it cause its funny, you got jokes... and the flow is pretty decent, kinda choppy cause some of the words are half rhymes in the wrong places but over all you killed it with some of the shit you said. for example...

    Cats lying worse than Jerry Springer, when they reveal their a guy
    Like the dude smashin' didn't see the sac when he hit it from behind

    ROFL

    and...

    And literally kill the joker like IJL members, impersonating Heath Ledger
    A few tweaks a week, and some treachery might keep ya beef fresher

    always good to see something about the Dark Knight

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    Re: Enough With The Small Talk

    why...?
    Always Impervious an Axis Power.


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    Re: Enough With The Small Talk

    Dayum dude...

    I had to go thru this a couple of times...your punches are sick...lol

    You drew out the picture with fucking punch lines...hahahahahaha.....

    Cool to see someone drop in just to make his presence known...

    Gotta go pour one and read this once more....

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    ALL THE CITY SAW WAS THREE LIGHTS/THREE NIGGAS DEAD MADE THREE WRONGS INTO THREE RIGHTS//

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    Re: Enough With The Small Talk

    Wait...wait...wait....

    WTF?!?!?!?!

    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    "And literally kill the joker like IJL members, impersonating Heath Ledger
    A few tweaks a week, and some treachery might keep ya beef fresher
    Since dudes on this site arguing back and fourth like two brothers
    Producing wack shit aint attractive, Black startin to show his true colors"

    ill.....hahahahahaha......ill

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    Re: Enough With The Small Talk

    Good diss. funny as fuck..
    Nothin' more to say really. I don't get in the mix of beef..
    Unless of course it's a batte. polled..
    Great job though. I liked it..

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