Sparring

[Johnny 6-feet]

Another chapter in the Dojo of the Flow...


Sparring

I roll like a bat out of hell; foes get trapped in the well
Enchanted, slapped with a spell from this acapell
And i'm just laughing, hell, just staying creative
Expanding my play list with marvellous stage scripts
On some outer space shit, twisting a tounge
Make a copycat feel like i took a piss in his lungs
Slipping your funds, stealing everything under the sun
That's a Mersey mentality; a hurting fatality
Watch me throw punches; spar with invisible ninja's
6 feet is cooler than a million winters
I got the sickness, a contagious disease to spit with
Hip-hop's a glass slipper, here's the foot it fits with

**kicks bag**

I'm no Prince Charming, more like Prince Alarming
Bringing the harm in, breaking bags when sparring
Throwing curses, throwing hex, loading up and blowing tech
-niques, and in his Dojo i've got to hold respect

**bag breaks**

[AlphaMetric]

this was a cool piece, short and sweet... I like your choice of word... it went well for what you saying.. u had an ok concept, but i think this couldve been made longer to up the imagery... so, ya this was cool, keep it up

[Ntalek]

cool lil piece here Johnny boy! simple and to the point the flow was there and I think this would've made for a dope collab...I liked the concept and the whole punch the bag shit...like I could hear a hit @ the ending of everyline...so props...on a good drop...

[Johnny 6-feet]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ap-374070.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...jl-374056.html

[Ink Poyzin]

A bit short, but you did a good job either way. I was feeling the flow, and that "Make a copycat feel like i took a piss in his lungs" bar was fucking dope. As Ntalek said I really liked the concept, and the whole punch the bag shit. Much props, and respect.

[BigChase]

It was alright. The wordplay was good, couldv'e been a nice addition if you had collabed with a couple other emcees, especially audio-wise.. it gone off nice wu-tang style. But standing alone.. it was seemed.. incomplete in a sense. Good looking tho

[P. Mortuus]

Glad this wasnt something long and something worth the read.Shit I forgot who I was feeding lol all your shit be worth the read my dude.This piece was simple and to the point which sometimes are better then long pieces.the flow was hitting for me.The concept of the whole piece was on point just not something that would make me go wow.Like most of your other pieces digg me still good shit and sorry for the short feed but I'm pressed for time.

-Nyce.

Leave me some feed here please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ll-374265.html

[Axe.]

Pretty cool shit here man, I liked alot of the lines some stood out more than others, but your flow was always on the same level, and thats a good thing dude...not really a story here but shit atleast you kept me entertained, I didn't get bored reading it at all...I'd say its a cool drop, keep up the good shit man, I wanna see some story telling from you, cuz I know its what your best at.


- Phade.

[Slauhter]

It was entertaining because you were playing with words and shit.. not taking yourself too seriously. I liked a couple of lines but the rest of was kind of filler, either way.. it was fun and nice, short read.