defining illness

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destroying and breaking the shackles a of unequality
by taking the quality
of words and giving them a power
so undestructable
that they immobilize and shut down
the operations
of a hostile nation
where uncilivilized becomes civilization
peotry and arts becomes a foundation
and the microphone becomes a weapon
no ammo or bullets required
just voices that penetrate and break the hearts of liers
the suppliers of death
or the government is what they are known as best
but those with a mic
are the givers of life
the flickers of light.....in a world of darkness
we create a world thats flawless
where humans (got soul?)
that (re-evolution"ize") the people as a wholewhich leaves the world of chaos at a stillness......
Freedom of speech.......
......the definition of illness

[antology]

I think this peice coulda been alot better man. I found it hard to get any flow or rhyme scheme when i was reading this peice. But maybe it was just the way it was written, dunno. But yea man gotta lot of room to elevate. Keep at it.

Please RTF to "my place on this page".