Contendors Match: ..Randomized.. vs Advisory

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

..Randomized.. vs Advisory


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[®andom]

Dope man. Should be a good match. 14 koo?

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

yezzir.. 14 it is.

[®andom]

word, droppin in a bit.

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

Will edit verse in here wen u do

[®andom]

I Am Heading Outta Town, If An Lll Mod Can Set This Up Than They Will Be Up, If Not, They Will Be Up Tomorrow Night.

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level
racists bitch, all you do is brag do us a favor 'n start showin it
of course your ass is grass...I'll be the first white boy mowing it
sick freak, its like candy from a baby how your wild with excitement
whoever said he wouldn't take junior overlooked his child enticements
that's nothin to be proud, when go time your only known to touch base
you've went rounds with the best 'n it shows how you look so shitfaced
So don't even approach, you only chance a bloody sight if you choose
coz you coulda left with a win, but really it's only right that you loose

14 G'luck.

[®andom]

Thought you was droppin?

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds
im back in it now, up and down lately, not near consistant enuff to try me kid
u beatin me ? Nonsense.. < is exactly wat a voter wuld need to like ya shit
bitch u beat me now, and you'll have champ match next week, face it whore
you'll have a title shot in no time... worth waiting for
Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you
this massacre will be a world matter, watch at how quick random die since
i'm sendin punches India that'll surpass any fucking bombing crisis
thought u was hot shit, u droppin dope ?? I'm sonnin with clout
and this'll be a FARE fight.. Since u pay for runnin your mouth
Shulda I bring up ya history ? Why half da league aint want u around
Cuz your sucha man of your word... and that includes most of ours

Yo my bad nigga.. I have alotta shit goin today, ill see u inna rematch tho.. Howeva the votin goes

[Apex.]

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
Played on him
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
^Meh
LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level
Decent
racists bitch, all you do is brag do us a favor 'n start showin it
of course your ass is grass...I'll be the first white boy mowing it
Liked this
sick freak, its like candy from a baby how your wild with excitement
whoever said he wouldn't take junior overlooked his child enticements
Lol
that's nothin to be proud, when go time your only known to touch base
you've went rounds with the best 'n it shows how you look so shitfaced
Meh
So don't even approach, you only chance a bloody sight if you choose
coz you coulda left with a win, but really it's only right that you loose
Meh

vs

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds
Forced
im back in it now, up and down lately, not near consistant enuff to try me kid
u beatin me ? Nonsense.. < is exactly wat a voter wuld need to like ya shit
Forced w/p again.
bitch u beat me now, and you'll have champ match next week, face it whore
you'll have a title shot in no time... worth waiting for
Okay
Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you
Decent
this massacre will be a world matter, watch at how quick random die since
i'm sendin punches India that'll surpass any fucking bombing crisis
Played w/p. Not a great flip either.
thought u was hot shit, u droppin dope ?? I'm sonnin with clout
and this'll be a FARE fight.. Since u pay for runnin your mouth
Okay
Shulda I bring up ya history ? Why half da league aint want u around
Cuz your sucha man of your word... and that includes most of ours
Meh

Ad you really seemed like you slacked here. Honestly. Doesn't seem like you focused too much on wording or anything. Disappointed dude. Random takes this one comfortably in my eyes.

Vote: Random

[.Bullet.]

fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
s'alright.

you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
lmfao nice.

LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level
hard personal.

racists bitch, all you do is brag do us a favor 'n start showin it
of course your ass is grass...I'll be the first white boy mowing it
nah.

sick freak, its like candy from a baby how your wild with excitement
whoever said he wouldn't take junior overlooked his child enticements
nah.

that's nothin to be proud, when go time your only known to touch base
you've went rounds with the best 'n it shows how you look so shitfaced
ahah.

So don't even approach, you only chance a bloody sight if you choose
coz you coulda left with a win, but really it's only right that you loose
lol iight.

VS

i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds
ROFL nice.

im back in it now, up and down lately, not near consistant enuff to try me kid
u beatin me ? Nonsense.. < is exactly wat a voter wuld need to like ya shit
nah.

bitch u beat me now, and you'll have champ match next week, face it whore
you'll have a title shot in no time... worth waiting for
meh.

Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you
nice.

this massacre will be a world matter, watch at how quick random die since
i'm sendin punches India that'll surpass any fucking bombing crisis
LMFAO, top 10 punches.

thought u was hot shit, u droppin dope ?? I'm sonnin with clout
and this'll be a FARE fight.. Since u pay for runnin your mouth
nice.

Shulda I bring up ya history ? Why half da league aint want u around
Cuz your sucha man of your word... and that includes most of ours
nah.

overall pretty dope battle, i thought both of you came equipt in your verses with personals/punches, but i think random took this just because his verse was more solid and hittin.

v-random.

[Kontroverzy™]

sick freak, its like candy from a baby how your wild with excitement
whoever said he wouldn't take junior overlooked his child enticements
that's nothin to be proud, when go time your only known to touch base
you've went rounds with the best 'n it shows how you look so shitfaced

vs

Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you



battle wasnt that bad. random you came more consistant IMO. adv i also liked your drop but you didnt come as consistant. i think this came down to like one bar which i felt random delivered harder. adv only had one good line where i think random had 2 good bars and his verse on average is just better

v/random

[Chrit.]

you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness

vs

nothing

All Ad had was the India and Wait lines... but I've seen those concepts many times before. Random didnt come great... but atleast most was original. Both need huge work with wording...

v/Random

[YungFlow87]

RANDOM
fuck with excuses, we'd love you to leave now preferably anyday
It's obvious your not wanted, ad...you couldn't afford those anyway
ok
you can't rely on yourself, your past alone couldn't open a business
been flippin chrits bars so long watching it gives us motion sickness
neh
LLL was your worst kid, but all? they noticed you had several
sent you on a quest 'n look, Adventured into modding his level
neh
racists bitch, all you do is brag do us a favor 'n start showin it
of course your ass is grass...I'll be the first white boy mowing it
c'mon man nah
sick freak, its like candy from a baby how your wild with excitement
whoever said he wouldn't take junior overlooked his child enticements
the verse is kinda gettn repititive with obvious punches, which are also repitively un-witty, if that's a word
that's nothin to be proud, when go time your only known to touch base
you've went rounds with the best 'n it shows how you look so shitfaced
kinda played, but better
So don't even approach, you only chance a bloody sight if you choose
coz you coulda left with a win, but really it's only right that you loose
naahh yo.. left/right is one of those played punches that is only accepted if its just totally dope, and this is a very mediocre flip, so the bar just isn't good

vs.

advisory
i'm fed up wit ya shit hoe, fall back n hop off.. fat ass clown
da WHOLE league culd wait on u.. and u'd still have us by a hundred pounds
I don't evn get what your tryna say here, maybe its just me.. but the "wait on" concept seems like someone being a waiter, serving him or something, so based offa that, this is a TERRIBLE flip lol, and if you mean whole like whole wheat or something, then its laughibly weak lol
im back in it now, up and down lately, not near consistant enuff to try me kid
u beatin me ? Nonsense.. < is exactly wat a voter wuld need to like ya shit
they need non-sense? i don't really like it
bitch u beat me now, and you'll have champ match next week, face it whore
you'll have a title shot in no time... worth waiting for
nah.. I'm actually startn to wonder why your even in this match honestly
Bitch u started off good, had a quick jump start to textin dude
N now ya careers stuck in overdrive.. While we jus driveover you
simple, played, but its still a hint of wit
this massacre will be a world matter, watch at how quick random die since
i'm sendin punches India that'll surpass any fucking bombing crisis
I've seen this wordplay once before, and it was better, lol like by a lot.. yours wasn't that bad, but you seem to be missing that haymaker factor to your wording. evry bar you make is simply a split definition to the concept. no real creativity ya kno?
thought u was hot shit, u droppin dope ?? I'm sonnin with clout
and this'll be a FARE fight.. Since u pay for runnin your mouth
see what I mean? you just write [concept] + [simple split definition]
Shulda I bring up ya history ? Why half da league aint want u around
Cuz your sucha man of your word... and that includes most of ours
repitively following suit throughout the verse. you gotta switch ya wording up sometimes man

vote - Random based offa creativity

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

I guess ill say it again.. I keyed this verse, didn't have time, and didn't wanna make him wait.. I had alotta shit goin on, and I kno my drop sucked, but dnt tell me that I didn't word it right, I kno that, I jus threw them together... good shit random.

[®andom]

lmfao @ pen's critique. Since when did he turn into vaskez?