New Punches

**chaosmanuk** · July 26th, 2008, 10:02 PM

New punches and shit, nothin' really but just wanted to get some feedback.

I've got drop dead lines, but u wont see me kill an actress
he's ill him, kinda like me a millie backwards
theres a million rappers but none ov em can clash with mozz
on the track am frost, so fuck rollin man i had to rock
i dont take rappers off i eat with the rapper on
my swag is hot, u can call me dave blaine or magic mozz
theres millions billions trillions guys that wanna beef
its like uve just bought a bud, this is sumthin u gotta see (got a C)
fuck bud, im WISER than dat
if i didnt think i smoked beats why would i rap
my book is the heat, hot like hundred degrees
my album will get copped so much im now on the run from police
u asked me 2 prove how im the brightest guy
then the sun reflects off my watch its my time 2 shine
but dont get it twisted, i might just kill those cunts
cos u man can be diarhea and i still wont run
i make guys reverse into flames, so that they back fire
it didnt burn this flame though, guess i am a bad liar
im the higest force my lines are raw but hot im like a fire ball
im stable but i dont usually ride a horse
its like see u man are jealous my team is back for ever
ill give u beats but im quite keen on acapellas
the comparison its like sayin a nine and a stanleys the same weapon
i dont need fans i stay sweatin
i keep growin with my rhymes im a lyrical sunflower
i know im blowin this time im like physical gunpowder
u little kid u can't behave
so its like ur lines are only big in the middle like jodie marshes face
im always in the hood but man it hardly rains
start again watch my heart race recharge brains im a star in my lane
im number 1, ur number 2 in this which proves ur shit,
i get more ratings than movies kid
get back to where u been, u dont belong here
the fact that im number 1 proves i dont like long hair
this mans hot, makin things grow like a plantpot
and stop, u wont blow like a girl that only hands cocks
now this is gangsta rap im bright like a camera flash
but im like a lighter see cos i blast dem fags
this is the top team u dont want beef its like ur not hungry
u must be mad im runnin tracks i dont like cross country

**Ink Poyzin** · July 26th, 2008, 10:15 PM

Put two links in this, and i'll give some feedback, thank you..

**chaosmanuk** · July 26th, 2008, 10:22 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...8&postcount=24
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56&postcount=7

**Red Tha Baron** · July 27th, 2008, 03:29 AM

Nice multies & flow. The millie line & the number 1 line were pretty clever & creative. The budweiser concept is played, but you did a straight flip of it. I always like to read this bragging type pieces. Cool drop overall; stay up.

**Trema** · July 27th, 2008, 06:45 AM

i love this piece fam..dis wat um crackerlacken talking about you had class in this.

i liked the multies and the flow all the way dogg.kept me reading for a good time..no elevation needed only wat you would feel helps u but my advice is just keep writing..