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    Wave Your White Flag

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    1st- Kill The Deviant
    2nd- Baron P. Mortuus
    3rd- Martyr



    The crystal clear glaciers inside of my head,
    mound themselves like erasers -- some I fed
    knowledge of life. All the reasons for society,
    feeding my mind like demons support a deity.
    Words of the wise- how Adam and Eve died,
    images that surprise; ache deep in the mind.
    Confusion wraps itself around the thin issues,
    dropping an axe through my numb skin tissue.
    As I'm forced to pick up the white flag.

    Penning thoughts penchant fears in pendants
    locked around necks like chains pain indenting
    scripts on skin- chips of sin chip at me within
    thinning resolve beginning to fold & it's dim
    seeds sprout my mind in doubt from facts
    as fiction relaxes me see it seems to attack
    the ethereal plane- physical drowning while slain
    by cancerous membranes them games of faith
    remain the same to debase my base as I chase
    spirits & ghouls, ghosts laugh at this fool
    so lost raising a white flag to finish this duel

    life comes quick,keep track of the cards dealt
    before the reaper comes, and your soul melts
    to shards of the whole that seemed so dependable
    until flexibility factors and everything is bendable.
    I've tried to hypothesize looking through gods eyes-
    a labyrinth that applies to all things and all lives
    a bandit in disguise that supplies faultless demise.
    Through hardships and experience I'd surely advise
    that you wave the white flag and save the goodbyes.
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    Re: Wave Your White Flag

    3 cryptic and metaphors packed verses that were short and sweet. A good collab and a gelling of styles guys. You all stuck on topic and wrote concisely, the rhyme scheme were solid and the lines weren'y overstreched. Fuck, if i didn't know better i'd have sworn that this was written by a single person, take that as a testament to your teamwork.

    Keep posting and please rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...en-373347.html

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    Re: Wave Your White Flag

    Thank you for the feed. I'll be sure to rtf.

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    Last edited by Martyr ; July 26th, 2008 at 02:04 PM

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    Re: Wave Your White Flag

    you lal gelled such visionary rhymes were good and it felt like you all put eachothers pieces together great collab great track great everything, keep it up
    JB!

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    Re: Wave Your White Flag

    Martyr...I'll type normal for you buddy haha.
    Okay on to the verses...

    These verses were skilled by far, three emcee's with talent that shows in every drop.
    The vocabulary was a perfect fit for this topic and all of you prooved it well.
    The Flow Was Perfect, and the lines weren't in anyway overstretched it was well suited...
    It Defenetly seems to flow as all three verses seemed as if written by the same creative genious...

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    Re: Wave Your White Flag

    Thank you. I'm glad you alll like it so much.

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    We're amazing, I know.


    Thanks guys.
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    Re: Wave Your White Flag

    Dope collab, this collab was put together nice, no lack of skill. I give much props to Kill the Deviant, it all depends on that first person spittin'. And you started this off fresh, which made me keep goin', enjoying every verse. Alot of collabs I've noticed, they just ain't as well structured. Ya'll really watched out for one another, kept it smooth, incredible work. And great pick on the topic, I get sick of seeing people writing off the same shit. Only thing it needs now, a hook, a dope beat.. Once again, incredible work..

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    Thank you.

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    Love that kind of feedback.

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