children are our future

[the_origin]

people wanna kno whats wrong with hip hop
i'll tell u what it is its these dizzy ass kids
8 years old fuckin over the family biz
our product is the hip hop and this is just how it is
created by the soldiers who rose up out the hood
when the money wasnt shit but the music was so good
big dropped in 92 nas dropped in 94
96 do i jay z it or do I BIG it sommore?
this rap tree is still in bloom jus gotta pick it sommore
lets make it a bold statement let em pickett sommore
cuz we won't allow rap to become the victim no more
stand up and declare a victory for her
the way it is now tho we bein overthrown by the young
this is where the bulk of hip hop's problem has sprung
see the youngins favorite rappers are one of these whipper snappers
who's career is made up by the cameras and picture snappers
they think they so cute and they dress em up all dapper
see em on TV the kids want it the morning after
now mom dun bought em the album before she knew what was happenin
and thats the type of shit that got solja boy platinum
so now they not givin us what we wanting to hear
they entertaining the kids cuz they makin it more clear
its the voices of the children that got us all in the rear
and thats whats wrong wit hip hop honest and sincere

the origin


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[christopher dre]

yo this peace is so true man. i like the way you set it up too. i don't know how but the visual approach makes it a better peice. my favorite bar was "now mom dun bought em the album before she knew what was happenin
and thats the type of shit that got solja boy platinum"
that's some true shit man.

[antology]

Overall man i loved this peice cause everything you said was true. The only thing i can pick at is maybe ya flow jotted off in points but it didnt suffer much cause it was a dope peice, keep it up man.
Return the feed to "lifes too short to waste" if ya have time man

[the_origin]

good look on the feed

[Johnny 6-feet]

This piece was a rant and that was a good thing. I agree with you dude, the state of hip-hop is shocking these days and something needs to be done. You illustriated the problem and threw some history in to make the point. The vocab and rhyme scheme could've been stronger but the topic was there and the imagery was coming which are the 2 most important elements in a decent OM. Solid work.

Kep posting and please rtf: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ft-373427.html

[the_origin]

good lookin ima hit that up now

[the_origin]

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[Climar]

Right, it's true. But one thing i noticed - please write a bold about size 5 title also in front of the text, because then it looks better.