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    That Shit Cray Chris Black's Avatar
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    Chris Black Fell Off

    Chris Fell Off


    Niggas want me to chill - don’t get stressed.
    Fall into obscurity, like other text vets.
    They say my best bet is to stop and just rest.
    But when I reflect, mess make me vicious & maddened.
    I can’t sit through this havoc,
    allowing bullshit to happen,
    or ignore mods on RB fixing the matches.
    This shit is just wackness, & I don’t like dudes.
    Believin’ you hot cause niggas hyped you.
    Coming up with point systems to get you the title.
    I’m you niggas’s Idol. You wish you was him.
    No originality, all you bitches is dim.
    Now you have to make a story with a twist at the end,
    & if you don’t, you wack? - Retarded ass kids.
    Ironic twist? Bitch, I started that shit!
    It was five years ago, now cats is commin' through
    Acting like they doing somethin' new.
    You mu-fuckas is dumbin’, dude.
    I can’t take this shit no more.
    Too stupid to realize, you useing my style from 04!!!
    & since my verse aint a box, they say my flow’s poor,
    & punish ill cats for coming with new shit.
    Every verse in every league is the same, with few hits.
    You dudes bitch when I don’t write like I used to.
    I could, but I’m growing & I wish it was the same for you fools;
    'Hoping the vets would begin to recede;
    Pretending Daz & Nahlidge & shittin’ on 90% of ya league.
    You kids should just flee, and hope I don’t name you.
    Be more like a Maven, but you cats is too lame to.
    Then the same dudes get mad when I doubt them.
    A new mod just told me there would be no SS without him!!
    What the fuck are people thinking? Still givin' me hate.
    I just went to SS and fixed your mistakes,
    & you know who I’m talking too, wack kid.
    Cheating to win titles cause you can’t hack it!
    Niggas thinking they the next me? NEVER
    You got more loses in the last two season than I had, EVER!
    And this is nothing, I can really write a diss,
    but I wont - cause you can’t touch this type of shit
    I’m just saying what I’m thinking,
    & you not gonna turn me.
    I’ve won over $1000 in topical tourneys.
    I can revert back and shit on cats - you know me!
    But I’m too big a man to become the old me!
    Now, none of you understand my stlyes or like Chris
    But by 09, you mu-fuckas will be writing like this!!!

    Until then, just say I fell off.
    Wack mu-fuckas.
    Last edited by Chris Black; July 23rd, 2008 at 02:29 AM
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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    Chris Black is illin.
    No seriously though, kids now definitely do use the style he used in '03 n '04
    recognizably too at that.

    I think he should run SS to be honest, if he had the time and effort
    I'm not sure I thought he used to run it back in the day when I was
    around.

    Still one of my favorite drops ever, by anyone - was the one he did
    about that Scare tactics show or whatever with someone actually dying
    or some shit. It was pretty dope.
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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    booo... I dissagree with your opinions... people write how they wanna write... they don't write to be like you back in the day. but anyways, good rant I guess? glad you got that out of your system. [Edited by the man] will like this like a fatboy loves diet food... yeah...



    I mean... that guy you're talking about...

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    I'm not saying everyone studied me and tried to do it. What I'm saying is, a lot of people write like I used to and don't even realize it.

    "Too stupid to realize, you useing my style from 04"
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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    You fell off, fam.

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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    why so subtle

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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    This was dope...

    Lots of props.

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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    This was dope as fuck. The flow was near perfect. You made alot of valid points and pointed out alot of shit people are to afraid to say. You deff have not fallen off, dope shit man.

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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    Well, i haven't been here since 04, and don't know who took your style(s). But I have to say, this was pretty fucking dope. The flow was consistant throughout the whole piece, well wrote, and didn't snooze me one bit. I want to say, I agree with Cry in some way... But from what I've seen so far, it's like, everybody using the same rhyme schemes here. All I can say is, your good at what you do. So, just keep writing, I'll be sure to leave feedback. Well, peace...
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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    Pretending Daz & Nahlidge & shittin’ on 90% of ya league.
    word. i feel this shit.
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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    lol it must be pretty competitive in SS for you to deliver shots in om. shit was pretty tight though chris.. and I respect your feelings on people you think are jacking your style from back in the day, shit much have you fired up, but you cant say you created the style of making a twist at the end of your storyline, its been done before '04, so you took it from someone who took it from someone else.. i mean i write the same way i wrote a year ago, and i dont see myself getting any better than i am already. then when i see people using a similar flow than the one i've got, unlike any other, i get kind of pissed, but you should think of your old shit being looked over by heads that take your style to get better and elevate they skills, but it aint cool if they bite the type of flow and wordchoice identically.. so nice verse CB, i guess you got your disses and points across..
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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    I really enjoyed this Chris, for the fact that it seems real. This didn't become a childish rant dissing kids, but rather, you were simply stating your feelings/opinions in a matter that you would be heard - I feel you on that.

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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    As an OM, this is awesome...Its written in a way that I could see it dropped with a mic and beat. Loved it.
    The flow was tight and on spot, the emotion behind it all was brilliant and pushed the entire piece. I didnt know what the hell to expect when I saw the title...But I wanted to read it all the minute I started.
    I think its amazing how well you articulated exactly what you felt, not in an abstract imagery drop, but in a piece full of emotion and reality.
    I'm sorry if you feel fucked over... I've always enjoyed your drops...I hope to see more.
    Thanks bro
    (any chance of you hitting my poetry drop in my sig?)

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    Re: Chris Black Fell Off

    I basically loved this. I agree about the voters needing a fucking twist all the time, it pisses me the fuck off. LoL. Great rant piece, really, I thought it was dope and real as shit. And you're still pissed at Burd, LoL, pretty legitimately probably, but it's funny.

    Nice shit, dude, that was a really entertaining OM.

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