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    Closed Eyes

    Closed Eyes
    By Got Soul? ©



    Some say there’s 7 Wonders of the Natural Earth, I beg to differ.


    Beautiful melody dances with echoes in a fine harmonic tune
    Each octave rotates perfect, naturally synchronized with the moon
    His blinking lives up the room, a talented mind stuck in gloom
    Finger tips delicately placed releasing a guy’s subtle mood
    Swaying ecstatic brain left to right, but he’s far from saying no
    Amazing Grace blessed the night, his heart rate pace is slow…..

    *pause*


    Hands slap down violently, attacking, abusing blacks and whites
    A seriously passionate movement in the heat of the act tonight
    Majors and minors released to the ear when extracted right
    Gasp for hype, magic created with the exact same hands that type
    Explosive notes openly written to a crowed of perpetual civilians
    Escaping a force fed reality, a mans heart isn’t beating, its living this
    Excitement exits the voice box to dance dramatically with tonsils
    Lights dim synchronized with a ere silence …everything’s gone still
    Whispers vibrate a vibrant arena, humans stand anxiously impatient
    Low voices turn to chants, questions ask ‘were the mans face is’
    Blinding lights shine like crepuscular rays, reality confronts the crowed
    A man sits dark glasses skill level that would make god proud
    Finger tips caressing keys in alignment, creating heavens leading note
    Deceptive cadence anticipates smoothly, creating a breathing hope
    Semitones hang in the balance like a talented tight rope trapeze
    One man generating an orchestral similarity produced frequent with ease
    Blissful sounds of Enharmonic Intervals emit joy and excitement
    Vision of Espressivo, views of love, from a man who lives sightless




    Dedicated to Stevie Wonder, The man that see’s more than you and I



    Even though he lives with Closed Eyes.

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    Re: Closed Eyes

    more like a poem in the first part...flowable in the 2nd part but not my style given it was a dedication ... pretty classy drop none the less but alot more wait as a tribute poem then rap in my eyes though you can rap poems i mean its almost the same thing..

    vocab was good although no shit i had the dictionary out in my head bro lol

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    Re: Closed Eyes

    Shits dope homie. I'll leave feedback in a bit.

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