It's going down tonight

[AlphaMetric]

It’s all goes down tonight, it’s all goes down tonight
It’s all goes down tonight, it’s all goes down tonight



First off guys, I take it your all fuckend gay
Yes, homo, oh no, tape my guts away and I say
You aint makin any play, I say I protect my case
From all you fuckend gay homo trying to rape my ass away
I don’t care, Marijuana is what I have, a mass so massive
It stop traffic, bigger then Jurassic, and taste like chronic
Head goes static, can’t count mathematic, now I feel like plastic
All stiff from that bong I did, and brain confusing ma state of mind
As I go blind, in a train as I come back, focus and reinstate time
To when crime was non-existence and marijuana legalize
If crime was non-existence, wouldn’t we have a better life
Wont have to fight for our guilt and rights and finally be alive
I say we fight and we don’t stop till night
Sacrifice is what I do, or else I wouldn’t survive
The night, this fight, it’s all goes down tonight



It’s all goes down tonight, it’s all goes down tonight
It’s all goes down tonight, it’s all goes down tonight



It’s going down motherfucker, invade the embassy
Leave elephant stranded, rambling around enemies
Alien alike, and I strike, you dike, I Merck you alive
After you die, I strive for power twice, with the almighty might
Legalize marijuana, no more crime for this crazy time
We live, we strive for peace, and we don’t stop till night
Smoke big blunts, nine inch longer then this fuckend dike
Who runs the country, the streets and homeless shelter alike
Legalize weed to halt crime, and save millions of dimes
Even save a year or two of time, but politics is like a mine
Ready to bust at any time, say what peoples want to hear
In fear they wont get elected, and afterward, change gear
Then hear millions cry in tears, because they live in fear
Because of crime and criminal at every block in town
Be part of this everyone because it’s going down



It’s all goes down tonight, it’s all goes down tonight
It’s all goes down tonight, it’s all goes down tonight


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[Seedy]

it was a choppa style

[AlphaMetric]

it was a choppa style

excuse me, can you elaborate plz....

[antology]

Very nice mna, had very nice rhymes, some of them were a bit basic but the peice didnt suffer from it cause you had a nice flow going. Chorus maybe coulda used some work but overall very nice peice man. Keep it up.

[nineties flava]

I'm sorry, but the first two bars was wack...


"First off guys, I take it your all fuckend gay
Yes, homo, oh no, tape my guts away and I say
You aint makin any play, I say I protect my case
From all you fuckend gay homo trying to rape my ass away"

Almost made me stop reading but I decided to give you the benefit of the doubt. The rest of it was much better, but you could still use elevation... I noticed that you had a rhyme scheme, which was good, but in many cases it was oversimplified, like rhyming "mind" with "blind". Bigger rhymes will come more naturally with practice though, so that aint too much of an issue... topically, this was alright... O/A, this was about a 6.5/10. Stay up

return the feed on my piece "Killin It"

[Seedy]

it was straight

[AlphaMetric]

First off guys, I take it your all fuckend gay
Yes, homo, oh no, tape my guts away and I say
You aint makin any play, I say I protect my case
From all you fuckend gay homo trying to rape my ass away

just wanted to use this opener to express my anger of what peoples get in the states for weed usage and selling.... they are treated like dogs........... and weed should be legalized

[AlphaMetric]

^^a

[AlphaMetric]

upping

[AlphaMetric]

Dead.... upping.... feed would be welcome so i can do a crazy piece next time, come on

[ReWiind]

Why isn't this piece audio? This is not text material.

t’s going down motherfucker, invade the embassy
Leave elephant stranded, rambling around enemies
Alien alike, and I strike, you dike, I Merck you alive
After you die, I strive for power twice, with the almighty might

You know how hot that would sound audio? with the right rhyme scheme.
Good work Kid.

[AlphaMetric]

upping... feed both pieces plz