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Thread: Son Of God

  1. #16

    Re: Son Of God

    This was a decent piece overall. I feel kinda like you rushed through this, and thats why there wasnt a strong & consistent "point". Its like you just put down all the thoughts that struck you & moved onto the next thought as soon as it hit you. The rhyming was decent too, some multies but nothing dope. Keep writing, and next time try to stay on one thought & elaborate on that single thought.

  2. #17

    Re: Son Of God

    Man, what the fuck is that? Like some one said before: couldn't understand this shit. And all in this was bad, worse or worst. These rhymes you dropped couldn't make my ears fly. Actually it was disinclined.

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    Re: Son Of God

    uppin thats bullshit
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