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    Necro-Phil-I-Act

    Necro-Phil-I-Act
    -One hand washes the other
    .
    My Letter of Confession
    .
    Summer time Blues- I’m ready for you
    Darkened days settled in but through the mist of it all,
    stood a man at that age, who knew no way to fall.
    Playing off of what he could only actually really get,
    upset of always being next, finding away out of this mess.
    That would be left over, but he had it all checked,
    working hard for his earnings still laying in regret.
    Animosity stirred when time came for the graveyard shift,
    bustin’ ass for the higher class gettin’ nothing but shit.
    Eyes fogged and baggy,
    his heart worn out and saggy.
    In bed with different women,
    ..but right after he’s feeling trashy.
    -but he keeps laughing

    “Many women pass me, like a buffet line,
    as I’m only referred as meat to these ragged to riches felines.
    But the same women seem to always change they’re minds,
    When the headboard starts bangin’ and I’m pushing from behind.”
    Sweat slowly drops onto her sultry skin,
    so deviant and elusive but I always find my way in.
    In and out strokes, my thoughts weld happiness,
    more pressure applied with pleasure, whispers like crackled lisps.
    She looked sort of different from my point of view,
    so I changed positions on the bitch, but she would not move.
    As I let go she fell… what was I supposed to do?
    I had a clue!
    lay her underneath the sheets…for a few- no one even knew.
    -Excellent!
    .
    .
    I came back to the room, had a black plastic in hand,
    kept her intact with tape then stuffed her ass in the bag.
    Took her home for dinner… and dessert as well,
    role-playing for hours, then she got heavier to carry and stale
    It’s that time again of the month,
    so I go to work dressed with a smile and in the bag…my lunch.
    -Break time…I’ma go and get me some!
    Her body kinda stiff… so I warmed her up,
    a human microwave, I was…
    …my favorite piece the butt.

    To tell you- the honest truth
    She is extravagantly delicious, if only you knew,
    her natural beauty would sweep anybody out the room.
    That’s why I had to have her… only to myself,
    but my secret leaked out, they said I needed some help!
    That’s not what I need, just some extra clothes is fine,
    cause I like to dress her up… now that she’s finally mine
    -I sip slow on this fine dime
    So read this letter carefully…you can have her if you’d like,
    she sleeps in my kitchen…
    …in the pantry on the bottom; next to my wife.
    As for me well… just go to the hallway past fridge,
    I hold a surprise for you to suck on…
    …with a rope tied with a tight grip!
    -Piss off



    My name is Phillip I. Actoves
    “I fiend on Rotten corpse as pleasure”
    Last edited by Spoken; July 17th, 2008 at 04:05 AM
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    Re: Necro-Phil-I-Act

    bump bitches damn
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    Re: Necro-Phil-I-Act

    nice drop cuzzin'...u really broke it down, word play wasnt all that, but in all u did yo thing...9/10 holla

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    Re: Necro-Phil-I-Act

    I'm pretty sure this is the same piece you dropped previously, if it is I fed on it and I now you acknowledged that. Giving you an acceptable bump on this one though.

    Quote Originally Posted by SyaNidal View Post
    This read more like a poem in my opinion. I couldn't really find a solid flow in this drop, just something to work on if you like, it could be better. The imagery was good in this though, really painted a picture to me. This drop kinda reminds me of some of the stuff I wrote back when I used to be around.

    It's a solid drop, you just gotta work on your flow a little bit. Rhyme scheme could use some buffing, the imagery was nice - try to work on more internal stuff too if you can.

    Pretty decent drop though
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    Re: Necro-Phil-I-Act

    fuckn shit wasn't sick vocabulary wise ..or all that other gay text shit but ...dude rofl at switch position on the bitch but she wouldn't move muahahahah get a fuckn mike and hit me up for some demonic sick collabo shit on fuckn dead bitches yo ...


    IMO best i've read on this site yet pzzz

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    Re: Necro-Phil-I-Act

    Shit someone close this i forgot i re0titled it to face first...my bad!
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    Re: Necro-Phil-I-Act

    Necrophiliac?
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    So you fuck dead people........

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