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    quick pointless, introducin myself with some bars

    so ruthless i keep your mom in this brief case
    rappin with a knee brace ill get you high they call me freebase
    Heres a quick ten bars for yall to get to know me
    think your hot homie? Get your mind set to show me
    i came to the site hopin I can spit with the best
    recognize after these bars and admit it im blessed
    im above average your as sick as the rest
    im sick with the vest while you get hit in the chest
    as your gaspin for air the police is impressed
    your mother your daughter your niece is depressed
    if you wanna battle call me out, ill knock out ya teeth
    start a war bring it on im all bout the beef
    im all bout the girls and im all bout the green
    im talkin money and buds nigga you know what i mean
    i got a flow so sick and my greens so thick
    ill run through all u motha fuckas my sixteens so sick
    call me out for a battle i get mean so quick
    i wont tell ya i won ill let the negroes pick
    ill battle everyone one on this site starting with you
    what up im free and im tryin to be part of a crew

    i really got knee brace, buddy and i got in a car accident, thats why ill be on the puter so often

    kinda shitty couple bars, real quick, I had nothing on the mind, im fresh to the site, let me know what yall think… and is there crews on this site?
    Last edited by FreeBaSe; July 14th, 2008 at 09:11 PM

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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    Not bad...

    You need to follow the forum rules. Drop some feedback on other people so you can get some on yours.

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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    i will i will i just registered homie but thanks

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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    dude, i like the flow alot in this one, i had a good time readin it lol
    ur lyrics are pretty tight, all in all that was a nice intro... props...

    peep mine....

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ck-372590.html

  5. #5

    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    yo thanks alot that was some good feedback appreciate it

    keep em comin

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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    id stop writing stuff about how dope you are and starting writing something that has meaning and wit....

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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    dude when i feel like droppin somethin with meaning id name it somethin other than quick and pointless, correct?

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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    That wasn't actually shitty. Had a solid flow and nice rhyme scheme. That was a nice drop. If that was shitty drop, i wanna see what a good drop of yours is like.
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    Re: quick pointless, introducin myself with some b

    Before you even begin to drop more....
    ....try reading the rules..

    Oh and your piece wasn't good at all.

    good day to you sir.
    Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
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    Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
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    Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
    Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon

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