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    ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    Everything now illestrates lost percepton, showing a false reflection
    To be honest here's another mistake one from life's less in/lesson
    This art, this game, this emotion, its all one pain
    You start, you frame, all this commotion in one name
    Without any shame, only one to take the blame
    Tried to comprehend,but ignorance seem to stay the same
    Self respect and ambition so thin sanded, no removal of this bandage
    Brought up tough, so there was no use of pamprage
    However you interpert this its going to be a change
    That so many place their faith in, or so hopelessly aim
    Dreams exsists in what we percieve,....
    You can call it Allah, God, The Truth or.... Mystery
    There's many untouched paths that our souls travel
    Wether it be... grass, dirt, mud or gravel....
    Just the begining journey of my thoughts...
    Within the path that I walk....
    And before its to late,
    Conteract the fear that bottled inside this shell
    Sit for a spell, and contemplate being banished to hell
    Lots of room for doubt but that's what I do inside the silence
    In the chambers of my mind contemplating results of violence
    All yall do is give me projected ideas to rest my head on
    I sleep on what you say cause after your small talk, there's nothing I've fed on
    By my side you'll see the world in a whole new light
    My written response you smile at, while a records in rotation
    It spits 'your welcome in courtesy of your thoughts and imagination'


    *Thinking is a process of bringing thoughts to reality, from which we record in our memories*




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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    Quick keystyle... nothing special...

    Just bored
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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    ^i liked , i always show love to my fellow femcees especially when they not on that titties n ass rap... nice freestyle that my element ....keep showin your shit girl!!

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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    For a quick peice this was very dope man. You should add on it and make a full song bro.
    Can you leave some feed on my peice "deny it all you want" please?

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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    Thanks.. More feed
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    Feed... I'll rtf if I haven't already fed your drop
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    Come on now.... I feed just about every drop in the om... so somebody do the same
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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    ill feed this man, just wait till i finish eating, can you feed my myth of mythology too?

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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    this was good man, felt like a tupac piece to me,,, you used alot of rhymes tupac used in the song my block.... and flow went through real good with that song.... i liked this piece.. fav lines were

    "This art, this game, this emotion, its all one pain
    You start, you frame, all this commotion in one name
    Without any shame, only one to take the blame"

    good job man, rtl my shit alrite

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    ^^^^^ uppin... for more feed
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    This art, this game, this emotion, its all one pain
    You start, you frame, all this commotion in one name
    Without any shame, only one to take the blame
    Tried to comprehend,but ignorance seem to stay the same

    fav lines ^^

    nice verse

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    Re: ..:: My Thoughts ::..

    I think you've got the chances to really do something with your drops.
    Youve got some good thoughts and ideas. Your imagery needs to be vamped up and it needs to be a bit deeper, more emotional. More intricate too...
    You some good stuff though...The gravel part talking about the paths to God was good.
    So well done...
    Ever need help on a drop, let me know

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