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  1. July 10th, 2008, 06:43 AM #1
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    Myth of Mythology

    Enjoy peoples...

    everyday misery leavings emotions crackle
    feeling like my soul trap in shackles
    And anger in me creating freckles
    Of problems I just cannot deal with wackos
    Self esteem rock bottom like sicko
    I’m a myth of mythology of science of life
    Creating living things but became sick and dying
    Too many problem in my life making me suffering
    Bullying became a part of my life for unspoken reasoning
    becoming lazy, rooming 24/7, smoking
    next day seizures till I fall, O no… just call
    I don’t know where, fuck, I’m in a seizure
    Motherfucker just call the fuckend hospital
    Before I fall in a deep coma
    And 3 days later wondering where the fuck am I
    Fuck, now I think I know what hell like
    A burning place with Sudan Hussein
    Messing in ma head, leaving trains of blinded shame
    And once they sneak out hitting emotions like a train
    You think that’s fair on me, failing and cannot explain
    My experiences with the devil itself?
    Trying to reach the top shelf
    But I’m too fucked up smoking myself
    The blood as I cut myself and dripping into wells
    Where I keep stash of blood from dissected mammals
    Didn’t know if I’d bring me luck but took the gamble
    Because when I gamble, I ramble this place to a scramble
    And mammals worship me making this place tremble on command
    Fuck, I’m the myth of mythology…
    Bringing alive these mothefucken technology
    So peoples can you-tube me in their tv screen
    And be boned up masturbating because they love me
    Fuck, get the fuck away before you give me fuckend cooties
    I don’t want a fuckend smoothie of your man made juice
    I made you-tube so peoples can kill you
    Mess with me and face become a mask
    Put a bag on top of your head with a can of gas
    What a sad ending to your stupid cask
    Because I’m the myth of mythology wearing your mask
    Because I’m the myth of mythology




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  2. July 10th, 2008, 06:49 AM #2
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    For best result of flow, use beat of ill kill you - eminem...
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  3. July 10th, 2008, 01:52 PM #3
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    ^^ 6 hours and no feed yet :-
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  4. July 10th, 2008, 02:17 PM #4
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    Use more multies for better flow structure. Other than that this drop was ill. Stay up fam!

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  5. July 10th, 2008, 06:00 PM #5
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    come on peoples, loosing a bit of patience lol. all day been waiting for feed, anyways, I'm upping lol
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  6. July 11th, 2008, 01:39 AM #6
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    Very nice man, you had nice ryhmes and kept ya flow on point the whole way through. Also liked the beat you done it to man.
    Me best line is
    "I don’t know where, fuck, I’m in a seizure
    Motherfucker just call the fuckend hospital
    Before I fall in a deep coma"
    because it has the word mother fucker in it LOL.
    Keep it up man
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  7. July 11th, 2008, 04:24 AM #7
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    uppin, dang come on
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  8. July 11th, 2008, 12:15 PM #8
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    142 fuckend views and only 2 fuckend feed, come on guys, i want that feed....
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  9. July 11th, 2008, 07:04 PM #9
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    Bump
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  10. July 12th, 2008, 01:23 AM #10
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    I hate doing this but nobody posting

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  11. July 12th, 2008, 01:26 AM #11
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    damn... i had a great vibe from you in this man... props on you dawg you had nice flow and structure you rtim eof wording was good. nice drop man i have to say elevation is a must i can see that but what you do is keep your style but learn from what yo read about imagery and emotion and work on it and you will be a great read for everybody na mean man... props on this though again good read!
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  12. July 12th, 2008, 01:27 AM #12
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    thanks
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    upping
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  14. July 13th, 2008, 02:28 PM #14
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    uppppppp
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  15. July 14th, 2008, 05:29 PM #15
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    Re: Myth of Mythology

    yo, definetly feeling ur creativity man...... my fav: line:

    So peoples can you-tube me in their tv screen
    And be boned up masturbating because they love me
    Fuck, get the fuck away before you give me fuckend cooties
    I don’t want a fuckend smoothie of your man made juice
    I made you-tube so peoples can kill you


    actually made me laugh a bit, its the truth though........ dope shit, keep it coming fam.....
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