Originally Posted by
MaNic_DePreSion
I usually try and encourage rappers... but I have to straight tell the truth here..
I sware this nigga sounded like Prodigy from Mobb Deep. Half of ya rhymes weren't even rhymes... real talk...You opener rhymes wacko, with freckles and sicko.... I mean from there I was already turned off... but you didn't fail to dissapoint.
You proceeded to drop more lines right after this combo with an even more confusing rhyme scheme:
I’m a myth of mythology of science of life
Creating living things but became sick and dying
Too many problem in my life making me suffering
Bullying became a part of my life for unspoken reasoning
becoming lazy, rooming 24/7, smoking
I mean... this is a ramble on bar... where I honestly dont even know whats "supposed" to rhyme. FAIL!!