shorty bang bang
shorty bang bang
Last edited by Sw0ne; June 21st, 2009 at 06:45 PM
decent drop yo. i liked the flow and slang for the most part, but in all truth i think the end bars got a bit shitty. like u just rushed rushed it on a thug ting to get it finished n shit...ha
wateva tho da shite was aiite. u had a good little character to your verse
so shit was a good rap apart from the end 7 lines
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haha
yah... different modes i guess.
Nice man, nice flow.
Not a bad drop al together. enjoyed reading it.
Drop some feedback on mine and Kilaplaya's peice "My letter to heaven", if you get time.
Flow was deff on point with this one, kept me reading the whole thing! Nice lil club joint goin on, multies even. Good drop!
I believe this was average at best, I believe that you just need to structure your lines more with the words you use.
good lookin
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