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Thread: 60 Line Battle Verse

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    60 Line Battle Verse

    This is a 60 line verse used in a battle vs Plz dont delete! let me know wut u guys think. all feed is appreciated

    Don't think i have good manners the way i'm telling off Plz
    But seriously tho...do us a good manner and get off your knees
    Your custom title is pointless cuz u replaced the points wit dot dot?
    That reveals perfectly that your obviously not hot
    I'm gonna grab the axe and chop, leavin his ass to drop bitch
    Watch you timber...
    Land, but you could never be close to producing hot shit
    Fagget stop it..your not succeeding in this lyrical conflict
    Plz, your shit is gettin old...you cant think of a fresh topic
    Your concepts are played, i hear the same shit day by day
    And the only thing you could be useful for is gettin out of my way
    You should already know, i got just about everything
    You just a broke joke, you couldn't even afford your wedding ring
    So you gotta head to the bank and get a fucking loan bitch
    But you also borrowing peoples punches, how bout get your own shit
    Don't take me lightly bro, just becuz i joined about a month ago
    But dont take this lightly...that your girlfriend's a fat ugly hoe
    Whatever tho....i'm just here to merk, hurt, and injure you
    Only time you could be noticed is a victim of assault interview\
    Fuck your name, you should change it to "Plz Dont Delete Me!"
    And if i was the keyboard....i'd delete you repeatedly
    Seriously...i barely know you..and you call me out to do 60 lines
    I should only do like 30, becuz ur ass is just a waste of time
    And i see you got a new job, talkin about gangs and guns
    But how would you know shit at 16, and never handled one
    And i also see that you trying to make a mixtape album
    Asking for free beats too? your shits fake with no value
    Nobody can stand u, this kid is more wacked than a baseball
    Watch me hit him in the mouth, and watch his face fall
    Your carreer is ruined, i'm going let it just ranshackle and collapse
    Because i'm runnin the real game, you just continue running laps
    I hate homos and you, your an annoying so stop what your doing
    If rapping was a class you'd probably be the dumbest student
    This kid thinks he's all that, fall back, he dont got his game planned
    Years ago he was a fuckin fagget, and today hes still the same man
    I thought he changed, he's still the same, he still killed the game
    Everything is exactly in the same position, his skills still lame
    Don't hate man, I got gats, ready to pop a homo who think they tough
    Said you'd make it rain, but in the last few years it didn't sprinkle enough
    Your one pathetic mutha fucka, You've never been indited into a crew
    They scoping out for people possessing skill, simply unlike you
    Your like a dog, slobbering and drooling, but i'm the fuckin vet
    And this nigga really stinks, even when he's not wet
    I had this kid standing still, like a poster, hes a poser
    And i still dont understand why he tries to get closer to doper
    It's funny...this mutha fuckin thinks he's a dope emcee
    But i just left him face first in the pavement like hes supposed to be
    So watch me grab the gats from the stash in back
    Ready to attack, then i'll have the last laugh, that's a fact
    We both know which one of us is doper, you got no future
    And why the fuck did destiny have to introduce ya
    I'll take ya'll and fuckin snap you in half like a twig
    Just becuz you stepped up to me and wanted to fight the kid
    I dont even understand why the fuck i bothered with a diss track
    You don't even deserve a fucking thing, your shits wack
    I'll hit him from the front, then hit him with the mac
    I had to hit him back, wit my gat, pulled my finger back
    Kids a gay broke, he's a gay joke, can't even afford a mic system
    Talking shit to me about HIV and AIDS, fuckin bitch might get em'
    Your a fuckin loser, i wanna smack you across the face
    And when i make his face split open, he'll lose his place

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    Last edited by Havoc.; July 7th, 2008 at 05:40 PM

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