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    Lost in Failure [Perseus And Ntalek]




    I lay balled in a corner a destroyed being
    you've taken away
    everthing that emplified what joy means
    My trifles are tragic
    I sit in grim bliss with my life in a basket.
    holding my head while gripping then
    unfolding my shed as the spread goes over my legs.
    I've tresspassed on your graveled grass.
    Seems as if I never left yet you travel faster.
    growing is the everlasting laughter.
    past of fasting knowledge,
    skimming through life's chapters.
    to busy hearing Chuuch from the wrong pastors.
    Mind held captive as I recapture the laspe of
    our worlds rapture. My inner beings'
    even trapped in a world after.

    I've had one two many drinks
    of failure in this failing society
    it could be worse, this I know
    my tears drop like ashes of snow
    once upon a time, I saved a family
    now I live in this alleyway calamity
    ashamed? Only when I ask for money
    that's when I realize, I have nothing
    I thought divorce was bad enough
    losing the people who I had loved
    but nothing is as soar to see
    then criminals having more then me
    I once donated millions to charity
    will children share that clarity?
    No loitering, no trespassing, no bills.


    What I have is contagious.



    Ntalek - First Verse
    Perseus - Second
    Last edited by Perseus; July 3rd, 2008 at 10:53 AM

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    Last edited by Perseus; July 3rd, 2008 at 10:59 AM

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    Re: Lost in Failure [Perseus And Ntalek]

    Leave links, if my lazy partner doesn't reach them. I will.

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    Re: Lost in Failure [Perseus And Ntalek]

    parise

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    Re: Lost in Failure [Perseus And Ntalek]

    yeah ups..

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    Re: Lost in Failure [Perseus And Ntalek]

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