I Rants..!

[DoubleG]

Intelligent Rants.. i like that... Running around with Gats, or Saving people, WTD They Both Hard!/ Honest.. And not to game wiht Preching/ The lEsson showed is staying, and No one around Here has been Teaching/ Getting aside from the fact. Just flow where it Lacked/ Putting A nice Life together, iT's Wanted, but Backed/ Way behind, don't know why, but waiting days to Deside/ Actually, it's been YEars/ Holy Shit/ Just to sit here and spit/ Would of thought a girl would be Fit, and aPproriate atire Already Aside, Beside me/ It's Not all bad, i Don't want to lie, but benieth, To myself, i just can't Lie Gee/ It'sTangled/ Really FuckinMessed/ It's stress without a Purpose, but It's Tied to me Like aDRess!/

20/20 don't seem fine/ These don't even feel like my eyes/ Seeing the things that i'm told aren't even evident, And Even at this age I'm Still Blind/ Still to the Side/ Mind, my own Business/ Still Catchin Problems like i'm Live!/ ( LoL)
Brought back , I can't Do this/ Worthless Feelings, Brought these *Worthless* Movements/ or Moments/ I can't Grope it/I hope it isn't as bad as i think/All in my Head Right/ Life aint' Tight/ Should be,/ It is / Actually/ Right? /

My Aunt just Stopped/ From closer to the Bigger City/ Definatly On my List/ No Matter What Night/ Couldn't Close the Sight if You Were Stairing Into a fire With Flashlights Flairing, All Night/ MorningsStill Bomb, But i barly make it most days/ And it's sO Short just to Begin with/ So sometimes I just Regulate the Must Hits/ Business/ I hate theDrama/ Just leave It the Fuck Alone/ You want something to talk about, i"m not even in the bars yet, and i can hear ShitTalking from the Stone/ Cold, Moments/ Misty Mornings/ Boring life, but I love Things that i Know Wholey/ ( like the Whole Thing, All of it.. Meh )

This Bad is really etching, Sketching me out, My brittle Woods' No good For the Feirce Frost Of the Colding, Bad weather, The times Chimm, and i can't Stay to Change!? My Range is Out Ranged/ Couldn't Even Consider/ OutRangious, What Were/Did You Think/ To even Say some STupid Shit, Seriously, and Aim It at Me/

Just a try , i can Die/ If i'd of Known it wouldn't Work,. I'd like to think i'd Of mind/Minded/ Understand.. Something that i still don't, So i don't even know/ Pass Judgement/ I thought Quick/ But now even slow Seems like i've got nowhere TO Go/ Yo .. Yo yo.. I love all This Shit/ So mA(E)nY things, But i'm Dragging Myself Threw the Mud, and Spitting on my Name/ HuH**&&!!@ Time to ReDress The Step/ Approach/ Post Notes/ Do Whatever../ No lience., Gett a Good Job/ Without College, You know your Bare/ Stare!!!/ as long as You Must/ I must/ keep on going, keep it going Till There's Rust Forming on the side of your Brain0!/ Car.. I don't know/ Why is that When you see The Stop Sign, You Always Seem To Go/

Get Along/ A song/ Just some Fun/ Making problems Out Of Nothing/ Yea i don't know that Kid, But Can't Instant Pass/Prejudge, That the guy Wouldn't Of Been My Tightest Man/ Serious.. Honest/ Fuckin Real, Let That HelplessGo By The WrIst/ Much Done/ Love, Keep it going/ The Flowing Ain't Stopped, But your Resistance Makes me Lonley!!!/ Hard to Seal./

Good As Guilty!!!!!!!
I love**(THIS)**!! Place.. Lost Or Anybody!! And EveryBOdy.. Fuck YEa

[DA_|NF|N|TE_1]

Your short story look like a long battle verse, with the barz on the end of the lines, but I guess you can call that creativity.

[Bootleg MC]

hey be careful with your post style. dey gon tell you to go post something like this 0n open mic or somethin.

[rappa-slater]

so der lotta haterz up this site?