Video killed the radio Star

[antology]

These thoughts are in my mind, that every rhyme i writes the last,
feelin like a contortionist, creeping through broken glass,
Expectations of killing raps, like an abortionist off tap,
am I runnin too fast? or fallin back in the pack?
cause expressions of my opinions, turn my mind black,
i interpret them as facts, but are noted as fiction,
as if the readers mind causes friction with wisdom,
maybe its entertainment, and they don’t listen,
to whats said in the verse, cause their scared of something different,
maybe their dim witted, brain capacity committed, to television,
cause when art is visioned, its unnoticed like time while fishing,
and its killing the spirit, of hip hop and music with it,
and millions of dreams of people considered as lyricist,
killing skill, like a disease that cant be cured yet,
video’s killing the radio star, like the buggles said.

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[Jeluz]

i liked this alot man, some good lines in this shit that gave some visuals. nice drop. nice line: "feelin like a contortionist, creeping through broken glass,
Expectations of killing raps, like an abortionist off tap"

[necronomicon666]

Incredible rhyme sceme, my eyes was glued to each line... incredible vocab and imagry.... i loved this peice... what good with a collab fam..... i think it just might turn out good... we gotta get this site up and poppen again

[antology]

Cheers for the feedback. Greatyly appreciated. I agree man, lets get this site jumpin again.

[antology]

This is an add on, on the last verse, check it out.


These thoughts are in my mind, that every rhyme i writes the last,
feelin like a contortionist, creeping through broken glass,
Expectations of killing raps, like an abortionist off tap,
am I runnin too fast? or fallin back in the pack?
cause expressions of my opinions, turn my mind black,
i interpret them as facts, but are noted as fiction,
as if the readers mind causes friction with wisdom,
maybe its entertainment, and they don’t listen,
to whats said in the verse, cause their scared of something different,
maybe their dim witted, brain capacity committed, to television,
cause when art is visioned, its unnoticed like time while fishing,
and its killing the spirit, of hip hop and music with it,
and millions of dreams of people considered as lyricist,
killing skill, like a disease that cant be cured yet,
video’s killing the radio star, like the buggles said.

Technologies routing these artist tryin to come up writing,
igniting a new trend, while buying honestly ends,
these piracy laws mean nothing, while having the internet,
down loadings so quicker, with nothing outa pock-et,
skyrocket to fame, don’t guarantee ya place,
in the some what thousand millionaires we have in this race,
99c cents a song, better make haste to make em,
creating a million, is a lifetime just wasted,
people don’t realize, these songs are translation,
of life stories, relations, and dreams of makin it,
similar to illegal immigration, startin new life in this nation,
but face it, as long as technology raises,
bend over and kiss the ass of this foundation.

From one thing to another, it seems they'll never end,
from records to tapes to CD's and than?
who knows whats next, what happened to the music,
the good days when people listened, not abused it,
the consumer used it, to escape abuse,
before corporate decisions, transformed it to news,
before digital illusions, became bad music’s solution,
this shits got me in confusion,
whether to trust this technology revolution.

[AlphaMetric]

yo, this was pretty mice, liked it, kinda sound close to my style a bit, i think we should colab maybe.

[WordPloy]

pretty coo pice yo. i liked the flow and multies
a couple of lines semed to end a bit forced. like i don't know what "off tap" means.
you had a decent amount of emotion, the vocab use was above average in places
all in all i found this to be a real good rap

check out my piece if u get time--

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...at-371632.html