MetaPhive Vs. ! @M

[! @M]

10 lines...
due in 30 minutes... afta check in...
meta u check in first...

[.Mack.]

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[! @M]

Metaphive?... Well let me introduce you to who i am
Ill use 10 lines to leave you cracked more than graham
A 9 mm to get u shot, 8 bullets and 7 seconds till u sleep
Leave u 6 ft deep kuz ur more garbage than 4 trash heaps
U a baby rhymer u prolly gon weep… neva gon beat me
U kan get 3 more fukin lines… but u wont get close 2 see
So in this 1 it’s betta that u would surrender jus remember
That im hotter than the summer, ur jus cold like december
Leave u dis-membered… and u dont have to be in a crew
Kuz ull prolly get jumped & jumped more than a kangaroo

[.Mack.]

Its a pleasure to battle u kid n ur skills gettin broke
N im weed'n out da bad emcees n ur constantly getn smoked
yea lifes a bitch n as far as a good 1, u aint choose her
And i aint never seen the ocean but i sea loser
kids tryna battle me but we all know u cant write
N nobody listens to ur shit but its play'd throughout da site
Been gone for a minute but its still da same ole me
and now u know im back, cuz dats all u can see
u picked da wrong one for dis battle so now ur through
n id clock u upside ur head but i dont wanna waste time on u

[SoopSa]

Metaphive?... Well let me introduce you to who i am
Ill use 10 lines to leave you cracked more than graham
no
A 9 mm to get u shot, 8 bullets and 7 seconds till u sleep
Leave u 6 ft deep kuz ur more garbage than 4 trash heaps
no
U a baby rhymer u prolly gon weep… neva gon beat me
U kan get 3 more fukin lines… but u wont get close 2 see
no
So in this 1 it’s betta that u would surrender jus remember
That im hotter than the summer, ur jus cold like december
is the countdown thing filler because its wack
Leave u dis-membered… and u dont have to be in a crew
Kuz ull prolly get jumped & jumped more than a kangaroo
best bar in ur verse just sad i had to read the 4 bars before it and see how shitty it was
vs


Its a pleasure to battle u kid n ur skills gettin broke
N im weed'n out da bad emcees n ur constantly getn smoked
k open
yea lifes a bitch n as far as a good 1, u aint choose her
And i aint never seen the ocean but i sea loser
not feelin it
kids tryna battle me but we all know u cant write
N nobody listens to ur shit but its play'd throughout da site
nuh uh
Been gone for a minute but its still da same ole me
and now u know im back, cuz dats all u can see
k
u picked da wrong one for dis battle so now ur through
n id clock u upside ur head but i dont wanna waste time on u
good close


V/meta more better attempts/punches

! @M needs to elevate bad and not do that lame countdown shit lol

Meta gets my vote on this one but i hope to read more better battles in the future...and ones where you actually try?

[Mauvais Loup]

u picked da wrong one for dis battle so now ur through
n id clock u upside ur head but i dont wanna waste time on u

vs

nada

weak battle.


jibberish, you had nothing whatsoever lyrically. you seriously need much elevation to go anywhere on this site.

meta, you had one mehish line that got you the win, you're in the same boat as ^%&*(^ as far as elevation goes.

vote-MetaPhive

[Tragedian.]

Metaphive?... Well let me introduce you to who i am
Ill use 10 lines to leave you cracked more than graham
Wtf? No.
A 9 mm to get u shot, 8 bullets and 7 seconds till u sleep
Leave u 6 ft deep kuz ur more garbage than 4 trash heaps
Uh..played?
U a baby rhymer u prolly gon weep… neva gon beat me
U kan get 3 more fukin lines… but u wont get close 2 see
Wtf?
So in this 1 it’s betta that u would surrender jus remember
That im hotter than the summer, ur jus cold like december
Wack, I think every rapper has said this.
Leave u dis-membered… and u dont have to be in a crew
Kuz ull prolly get jumped & jumped more than a kangaroo
Wack.

vs

Its a pleasure to battle u kid n ur skills gettin broke
N im weed'n out da bad emcees n ur constantly getn smoked
Lfmao.
yea lifes a bitch n as far as a good 1, u aint choose her
And i aint never seen the ocean but i sea loser
Lol. Played..
kids tryna battle me but we all know u cant write
N nobody listens to ur shit but its play'd throughout da site
Nah.
Been gone for a minute but its still da same ole me
and now u know im back, cuz dats all u can see
Nah.
u picked da wrong one for dis battle so now ur through
n id clock u upside ur head but i dont wanna waste time on u
Lmfao!



v/ Meta easy.

[.Mack.]

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[blkvixon]

I go with the metaphive person. didn't feel either but that's who was better outta those two. I just wasn't able to see the full picture that either was trying to paint

[.Mack.]

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[.Mack.]

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[Alphabetized]

Its a pleasure to battle u kid n ur skills gettin broke
N im weed'n out da bad emcees n ur constantly getn smoked

Vs

Nothing....


Meta wins.

[Idealistixx]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-369759.html
hit that

the clock u upside ur head line, n the now im back line were the only lines w/ potential. they weren't quoteable but they took this battle. @m didn't come with much of anything. meta came with an overall better verse

vote metaphive

[Ric_Be_Dat_Dude]

i felt metas more so im gonna give u my vote early

v=meta

heres why

complexity= although lacking in both his was the deeperr of the two verses

punches= harder hitting more direct and as previously stated^^^ there mor complex

flow= even yall both had that

personals= i aint bin here long enuff to pick thos up

in conclusion= thought it was a weak battle but meta def took it wit the lesser of the two evils

vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...de-369744.html

[Quest.]

!@m

Metaphive?... Well let me introduce you to who i am
Ill use 10 lines to leave you cracked more than graham
No
A 9 mm to get u shot, 8 bullets and 7 seconds till u sleep
Leave u 6 ft deep kuz ur more garbage than 4 trash heaps
played
U a baby rhymer u prolly gon weep… neva gon beat me
U kan get 3 more fukin lines… but u wont get close 2 see
noooo
So in this 1 it’s betta that u would surrender jus remember
That im hotter than the summer, ur jus cold like december
wow this is a overly used line, played
Leave u dis-membered… and u dont have to be in a crew
Kuz ull prolly get jumped & jumped more than a kangaroo
naw


MetaPhive

Its a pleasure to battle u kid n ur skills gettin broke
N im weed'n out da bad emcees n ur constantly getn smoked
ight
yea lifes a bitch n as far as a good 1, u aint choose her
And i aint never seen the ocean but i sea loser
meh
kids tryna battle me but we all know u cant write
N nobody listens to ur shit but its play'd throughout da site
naw
Been gone for a minute but its still da same ole me
and now u know im back, cuz dats all u can see
naw
u picked da wrong one for dis battle so now ur through
n id clock u upside ur head but i dont wanna waste time on u
nice


v/ MetaPhive

HIT THIS BATTLE UP: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ic-369909.html