J. Hens (53) vs Philly (42) HW TITLE

[Erupt]

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[Philly®]

around 16?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&postcount=14
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...04&postcount=6

[J.Hens.]

yeah 16's good

[Philly®]

week 17, beat ancel.... week 18, beat blue... week 19, *cracks knuckles*


i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17
now round 3 i'm knockin this kid unconsious, so there wont be a competition..
john won't be able to touch, hear or even see, phil..
untill he starts to come to his senses
take witness to this dudes swag.. johns on point.. so atleast he portrays
no lie! he's really fuckin phly.. like being openly gay is a fad these days
all ya shit belongs on a shelf hens, n ima let ya drought kick in
yea john stockton's of can's, cuz every verse he drops ppl doubt will win
dudes under the weather, a sick hit to his dome n watch the trauma begin..
the ranks? john can climate all he wants..
but we'll never see sunshine wit some winds
we all kno $pits rican, n just a dickride for john, plus other millions of stuff
i mean ur all over poppycock like thinking u'd beat me wasn't senseless enuff
ur shit just admit it, we kno your the dude makin a wack throne..
so if i make it to sit on stool, it's cuz john aint wanna move n got sat on
tryna fire shots bout rule n triggers, when ur the biggest fraud witta weapon
john hancock'n a pistol?..
shits so full of bullet can be wrestled n tied in 15 seconds

[J.Hens.]

Blue's french, 's obvious he's homesick, but his wackness is scarier
so it's kno doubt he's going Toulouse.. and any other metropolitan area

Boast of your talks to resin,even though the dudes a dyke
Funny u were talking of a gun from Paris & now ya goin Toulouse ya life

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
Now you're biting wack shit, that's somethin trouble won't surpass.
Sorry, your gay-stretches are only effective when you attend couples yoga class.
You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
When you brag about firin shots, I just scoff at this bitch.
This pussy has such small shells, COM's turtle wouldn't even offer to switch.
If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.
I've murdered you twice this season, you better believe I'm known to win.
So now I'll give you three L's in a row... as a reminder of the league I owned you in.



pz.

[Undisputed™]

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17
you bitch shit is good tho
now round 3 i'm knockin this kid unconsious, so there wont be a competition..
john won't be able to touch, hear or even see, phil..
untill he starts to come to his senses
mehh
take witness to this dudes swag.. johns on point.. so atleast he portrays
no lie! he's really fuckin phly.. like being openly gay is a fad these days
lol coo
all ya shit belongs on a shelf hens, n ima let ya drought kick in
yea john stockton's of can's, cuz every verse he drops ppl doubt will win
okish
dudes under the weather, a sick hit to his dome n watch the trauma begin..
the ranks? john can climate all he wants..
but we'll never see sunshine wit some winds
forced as hell
we all kno $pits rican, n just a dickride for john, plus other millions of stuff
i mean ur all over poppycock like thinking u'd beat me wasn't senseless enuff
ok...
ur shit just admit it, we kno your the dude makin a wack throne..
so if i make it to sit on stool, it's cuz john aint wanna move n got sat on
mehh
tryna fire shots bout rule n triggers, when ur the biggest fraud witta weapon
john hancock'n a pistol?..
shits so full of bullet can be wrestled n tied in 15 seconds
wp was fresh, but didnt really hit hard at all...



overall- decent verse, but i think you dropped a bit weaker then you have in the last couple of weeks, idk wasnt feelin much.

vs

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
ok
Now you're biting wack shit, that's somethin trouble won't surpass.
Sorry, your gay-stretches are only effective when you attend couples yoga class.
lol ok
You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
okish
Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
cool wp
When you brag about firin shots, I just scoff at this bitch.
This pussy has such small shells, COM's turtle wouldn't even offer to switch.
nah
If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
LMAO
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.
ok, nice name play
I've murdered you twice this season, you better believe I'm known to win.
So now I'll give you three L's in a row... as a reminder of the league I owned you in.
old wp, fresh flip though.

good verse, had some down points but def was good enough to take this matchup..


v/ J.Hens

[Erupt]

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17

hmm dunno wasnt really feeling phillys verse this week, his wording is hard to follow and takes the impact from what could be good lines
vs

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
When you brag about firin shots, I just scoff at this bitch.
This pussy has such small shells, COM's turtle wouldn't even offer to switch.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.
I've murdered you twice this season, you better believe I'm known to win.
So now I'll give you three L's in a row... as a reminder of the league I owned you in.

pretty nice verse from john, LLL, phly and close to my waist were all nice

pretty easy vote, Hens

[Big Question]

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17


PHILLYS VERSE WAS WEIRD THIS WEEK, A LOT OF HIS CONCEPTS/ WORDPLAYS HAD POTENTIAL (BULLET LINE, CLIMATE LINE, FUCKING PHLY ETC) BUT THEY SEEMED TO GIVE THE PUNCH AWAY EARLY. EVEN THE ONE I QUOTED WAS TOO OBVIOUS BUT IT HIT OK. I JUST THINK PHILLYS WORDING WAS QUITE BAD THIS WEEK WHICH DID LET HIM DOWN.



VS

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
When you brag about firin shots, I just scoff at this bitch.
This pussy has such small shells, COM's turtle wouldn't even offer to switch.
If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.
I've murdered you twice this season, you better believe I'm known to win.
So now I'll give you three L's in a row... as a reminder of the league I owned you in.


SOLID VERSE, ONLY BAR I DISLKED WAS THE GAY STRETCHES, NEVER SEEN GAY STRETCHES BEFORE BUT SEEN A LOT OF GYM/EXERCISE TYPE PUNCHES SO IT CAME ACROSS A BIT PLAYEDISH.

V/JOHN

[phlymo]

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17
we all kno $pits rican, n just a dickride for john, plus other millions of stuff
i mean ur all over poppycock like thinking u'd beat me wasn't senseless enuff
ur shit just admit it, we kno your the dude makin a wack throne..
so if i make it to sit on stool, it's cuz john aint wanna move n got sat on
^^^^^^this needed better wording and was very similar to a punch in the quotes system, but was good with the stool bit.

vs

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
When you brag about firin shots, I just scoff at this bitch.
This pussy has such small shells, COM's turtle wouldn't even offer to switch.
If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.

good battle, fun read. philly came decent but not as consistent or polished as he usually is. john came nice.

v/hens

[Horud Skys]

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
Now you're biting wack shit, that's somethin trouble won't surpass.
Sorry, your gay-stretches are only effective when you attend couples yoga class.
You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17
now round 3 i'm knockin this kid unconsious, so there wont be a competition..
john won't be able to touch, hear or even see, phil..
untill he starts to come to his senses
take witness to this dudes swag.. johns on point.. so atleast he portrays
no lie! he's really fuckin phly.. like being openly gay is a fad these days

Philly started off fresh had me going but he slowed down while John stay creatie vote Hens

[Qualm]

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17
take witness to this dudes swag.. johns on point.. so atleast he portrays
no lie! he's really fuckin phly.. like being openly gay is a fad these days
we all kno $pits rican, n just a dickride for john, plus other millions of stuff
i mean ur all over poppycock like thinking u'd beat me wasn't senseless enuff

vs

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
lmao^
Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.

Hens had a pretty solid verse here..quoted the majority of it. Philly had one or two good lines but he lacked the consistancy that Hens had.

v/ hens

[Rule.]

philly -

i'm destroyin this team, so how u gone say my verses aint forever mean
..when i've been consistently droppin dophe, since the start of week 17
- heh

now round 3 i'm knockin this kid unconsious, so there wont be a competition..
john won't be able to touch, hear or even see, phil..
untill he starts to come to his senses
- dude, nice.

take witness to this dudes swag.. johns on point.. so atleast he portrays
no lie! he's really fuckin phly.. like being openly gay is a fad these days
- ehh.

all ya shit belongs on a shelf hens, n ima let ya drought kick in
yea john stockton's of can's, cuz every verse he drops ppl doubt will win
- ok-ish .. lol how long it take to come up with this?

dudes under the weather, a sick hit to his dome n watch the trauma begin..
the ranks? john can climate all he wants..
but we'll never see sunshine wit some winds
- good idea again, but execution wasnt great.

we all kno $pits rican, n just a dickride for john, plus other millions of stuff
i mean ur all over poppycock like thinking u'd beat me wasn't senseless enuff
- nahh.

ur shit just admit it, we kno your the dude makin a wack throne..
so if i make it to sit on stool, it's cuz john aint wanna move n got sat on
- harshness wasnt there.. ok-ish.

tryna fire shots bout rule n triggers, when ur the biggest fraud witta weapon
john hancock'n a pistol?..
shits so full of bullet can be wrestled n tied in 15 seconds
- wording here.. reading this was like solving a puzzle lol.

vs

j.hens -

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
- lol

Now you're biting wack shit, that's somethin trouble won't surpass.
Sorry, your gay-stretches are only effective when you attend couples yoga class.
- corny.. decent i guess.

You're not a threat, and you'll get exposed in this race.
Yeah, you sniffed the title.
... but that was just his attempt at trying to get close to my waist.
- ha!

Quit actin like a gangster, you're usually the one dropping the purse.
He COULD provide Cover-Fire.. but he's not good enough to get on top of my verse.
- nice swagger. aight.

When you brag about firin shots, I just scoff at this bitch.
This pussy has such small shells, COM's turtle wouldn't even offer to switch.
- meh not really.

If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
- again, cornyish. didnt do much for me.

This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.
- aight better.

I've murdered you twice this season, you better believe I'm known to win.
So now I'll give you three L's in a row... as a reminder of the league I owned you in.
- hah ok.

not bad for a champ match. specially since u 2 have already faced. really liked philly's first two lines, but then after that he had a couple aight jabs, but it seemed some wording in spots and execution of some cool concepts kinda hurt him. Hens was pretty straight, he had a few lines that i just wasnt feelin, and a few where the humor factor just kinda went over as corny, but i gotta admit he was a bit more creative this round, and his delivery made his punches that i was feelin more effective than philly's imo. cool battle once again, but i got hens this time, again.

v. Hens

[-Coop-]

Just gon do quotes...

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take witness to this dudes swag.. johns on point.. so atleast he portrays
no lie! he's really fuckin phly.. like being openly gay is a fad these days
dudes under the weather, a sick hit to his dome n watch the trauma begin..
the ranks? john can climate all he wants..
but we'll never see sunshine wit some winds

VS

He has to flip wordplay, otherwise his lines get hardly any praise.
Your punches NEVER land-Phil... but all of us consider them garbage anyways.
If ya mom's tryin to get comfortable, everyone else is facing some harm.
Fuck elbow-Room. the fat bitch rents an apartment jus' to have space for her arms.
This is just a warm up for next week, nobody's are supposed to die.
Shit Philly, you could drop 2 letters from your name and still not be close to Phly.
---

Seemed like both took it easy this week, which was the smart thing to do. Still, Philly slacked off more.

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VOTE: J HENS
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[Vaskez]

Hens wins 8 to -6 as philly only voted twice

Hens +5 for KO and title defense

Philly -1