Different

[The Vortex]

I don't write like him, or her
instead merge words to pages
careless of the impression it gives
solicit this gift of Gods...

Illicit odds stacked against you
prove intellectually obscure
unless you're tuned to the tempo
and consumed by blatant songs...

I disown my rhymes in time
and these lines become bastards.
...

[Twixn...]

Cool shit man...

short snippet but you had some dope metaphors in there..

intellectually obscure

^ dope oxymoron...

all around a cool drop.. and long time no see man...

u should join up in IE.

[Mydra]

This was pretty dope man, I really liked your oxy moron as well, even though it is a short piece, it really said alot in my eyes, sort of a short speech in which people could remember forver if you know what I'm saying...


good job, and yes..you should join IE.

[The Vortex]

safe