**CONTENDOR** Lay Fear (11) vs. Sir'Viver (14)

[Mariah]

Due times:
Check in due Wednesday 11.59pm EST.
- if you don't check in by this time, and you DO end up posting, -2 votes.
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST. Yeah, that's eastern. not pacific.
Lateness = -2 votes even IF your opponent allows you to post late.
Max. extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.

Line limits:
10 min and 20 max. for regular battles. 16 min and no max in champ matches. If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

good luck.

[Lay Fear]

check. goinnn 12.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ny-368009.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=6387182
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368026.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...19-368019.html

[VazQuez]

Holy shit at a Contendership match!

Chekc.

[Lay Fear]

shit..what up


didn't even notice you..
he's too far below us, forget what your told when this match begins
they said get a leg up on the competition..
to be possible..he'd have to acquire some inspector gadget limbs
an sir ain't on our level..same shitty lines combined wit played hooks
s'fuck bein on the same page, bitch...we aint' even in the same book!
vet n seasoned?..votes are in ur the next who's leavin
shit..we all know Survivor got fuckin old after the first two seasons
Sir try n defend n get slapped..don't get offended ur whack
so if Surpasses me...nething it'll be a win in a contendorship match
composin it, no..this dog'll get booted it's no gimmick
this is his last time droppin shit..
.................before we start to scold him n rubb his nose in it
so' dude ur toooo weak, an truth is you'll have to be quicker
for his actions to speak louder than words..
........................this bitch would have to practically whipser


g'luck

[VazQuez]

Never get at me talking bout your hoes, believe I know hes single
cuz my lines are always better than lays, so call me pringles
im new and nice, while your punches are odd and played
He dosent explain his lines, so I Fukced your girl so i can get layed
and when im not on your bitch to your mom i go, shes hot
She always gives me brain, thats why im always deep in thought
Did i mention? i boned you girl, i left her with a sore bed
and when you cought me...
I punched you lights out, and left the bulb shattered in your forehead
get knokced right, i'll have him hit the brakes, ima stop light
you can catch fear bumping heads, when involved in a cokc fight

[VazQuez]

yea vote up



http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ny-368009.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...19-368019.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368015.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-368028.html

[Cred]

Wtf? You should tell Key to ghost for you or something.

[-Shift-]

didn't even notice you..
he's too far below us, forget what your told when this match begins
they said get a leg up on the competition..
to be possible..he'd have to acquire some inspector gadget limbs
ok
an sir ain't on our level..same shitty lines combined wit played hooks
s'fuck bein on the same page, bitch...we aint' even in the same book!
naw, i wasn't feeling this
vet n seasoned?..votes are in ur the next who's leavin
shit..we all know Survivor got fuckin old after the first two seasons
wording could of been better
Sir try n defend n get slapped..don't get offended ur whack
so if Surpasses me...nething it'll be a win in a contendorship match
no
composin it, no..this dog'll get booted it's no gimmick
this is his last time droppin shit..
.................before we start to scold him n rubb his nose in it
lol, ok
so' dude ur toooo weak, an truth is you'll have to be quicker
for his actions to speak louder than words..
........................this bitch would have to practically whipser
nice



Never get at me talking bout your hoes, believe I know hes single
cuz my lines are always better than lays, so call me pringles
this could of been nice if you had better wording
im new and nice, while your punches are odd and played
He dosent explain his lines, so I Fukced your girl so i can get layed
ehh
and when im not on your bitch to your mom i go, shes hot
She always gives me brain, thats why im always deep in thought
ehh
Did i mention? i boned you girl, i left her with a sore bed
and when you cought me...
I punched you lights out, and left the bulb shattered in your forehead
ok
get knokced right, i'll have him hit the brakes, ima stop light
you can catch fear bumping heads, when involved in a cokc fight
no


v//Lay Fear- his punches were more clever than Delah's.
Delah, a lot of your verse had sexual remarks. Too many i think.

[k3y]

Wtf? You should tell Key to ghost for you or something.

LMFAO!!!

[Lo0se CaNNoN]

he's too far below us, forget what your told when this match begins
they said get a leg up on the competition..
to be possible..he'd have to acquire some inspector gadget limbs

vs

nothing really

this battle was garbage for a contendor match.. i kno i came weak, but thas becuz i had a regular ass match.. both needa step it up, especially Sir', cuz your only decent punch (opener), was destroyed by wording.. Lay, you had that one baby played concept.. "you aint even in the same book".. both jus step it up next week, mainly Lay in the champ match.

v/ lay

[Jcorm]

didn't even notice you..
he's too far below us, forget what your told when this match begins
they said get a leg up on the competition..
to be possible..he'd have to acquire some inspector gadget limbs
Cool
an sir ain't on our level..same shitty lines combined wit played hooks
s'fuck bein on the same page, bitch...we aint' even in the same book!
Alright.....
vet n seasoned?..votes are in ur the next who's leavin
shit..we all know Survivor got fuckin old after the first two seasons
Nice hit, woulda made more sence to say the first season but it's still straight
Sir try n defend n get slapped..don't get offended ur whack
so if Surpasses me...nething it'll be a win in a contendorship match
Nah
composin it, no..this dog'll get booted it's no gimmick
this is his last time droppin shit..
.................before we start to scold him n rubb his nose in it
lol, nice
so' dude ur toooo weak, an truth is you'll have to be quicker
for his actions to speak louder than words..
........................this bitch would have to practically whipser
Nah

Nice job in here. Good with the dog line and survivor, inspector gadget was alright. Nice consistancy for the most part.


Never get at me talking bout your hoes, believe I know hes single
cuz my lines are always better than lays, so call me pringles
Decent concept at best
im new and nice, while your punches are odd and played
He dosent explain his lines, so I Fukced your girl so i can get layed
What? Come on man it's a contendorship match, this is fl status
and when im not on your bitch to your mom i go, shes hot
She always gives me brain, thats why im always deep in thought
Alright.......real basic though
Did i mention? i boned you girl, i left her with a sore bed
and when you cought me...
I punched you lights out, and left the bulb shattered in your forehead
Alright......
get knokced right, i'll have him hit the brakes, ima stop light
you can catch fear bumping heads, when involved in a cokc fight
Alright.......

And honestly I'm not tryina shit on you but when i said alright, i was just trying to give you something for putting a punch. I've seen you write before so i know you can step it up..........so do it cuz this ain't you.

v/ Lay

[SteveDave]

didn't even notice you..
he's too far below us, forget what your told when this match begins
they said get a leg up on the competition..
to be possible..he'd have to acquire some inspector gadget limbs

vs

nothing.

The sad thing, is that the line I quoted was 50 times worse because it was insanely stretched.

Horrible matchup for contendors.

v/Lay

[ramcees]

an sir ain't on our level..same shitty lines combined wit played hooks
s'fuck bein on the same page, bitch...we aint' even in the same book!
didnt hit very hard
Sir try n defend n get slapped..don't get offended ur whack
so if Surpasses me...nething it'll be a win in a contendorship match
nice
composin it, no..this dog'll get booted it's no gimmick
this is his last time droppin shit..
.................before we start to scold him n rubb his nose in it
okish
so' dude ur toooo weak, an truth is you'll have to be quicker
for his actions to speak louder than words..
........................this bitch would have to practically whipser
this is nice...abit confusing at first

vs

Never get at me talking bout your hoes, believe I know hes single
cuz my lines are always better than lays, so call me pringles
nice
Did i mention? i boned you girl, i left her with a sore bed
and when you cought me...
I punched you lights out, and left the bulb shattered in your forehead
i like ur wording here...half decent punch tho.

Vote lay...abit more concistent then Sir..but not a bad battle

[VazQuez]

Up for more votes

[Warming]

composin it, no..this dog'll get booted it's no gimmick
this is his last time droppin shit..
.................before we start to scold him n rubb his nose in it

vs nothing

that was probably your coolest punch to me lay, a few other not bad ones like the survivor seasons but clearly you didn't have to try to hard

delah a lot of your concepts are on the brink of getting better, the lays and getting brain concept arn't really worded effectively, try to reread your punches and make sure everything works n you'll get there eventually