My Openin' Drop,,..

[DeTox™]

What It Do?!...

DeTox aKa Mr.Pyzschoo,,..

A Clever Dude That Severs You, See Me Coming, You Better Move
Or Get 'Fathered' Cuz A Daddy Is Something I Never Knew...
Testify! I'm Justified, Hope My Future Will Never Lie
Cuz Present Time's Been Memorized, Fix The Damage Like Pesticide.

And These Snitches? They Tell Police, Get To Singing Like Della Reese
...'Jumped Off The Ledge', It's A 'Nightmare', I Hope I Just 'Fell Asleep'...
Hit The Ground But I Survive, My Family Prevents Me...
From Returning Home, Got My Own Family Against Me.

The World? I Entered It Crazy! Doctors Delivered A Baby...
That Would Insight Pain, Trigger Finger Bends/Benz Like Mercedes...
No This Isn't A Sick Gimic, Either Quit It Or Get With It
Here's A Quick Image...Kinda Nasty, Eat Rappers And Shit Lyrics.

Top 5 About Whose Ways Are Sick, Believe Me I Will Make The List
Can't Take My Shit, Only Time I 'Let My Seat Up' Is When I Take A Piss...
I Guess I'm Ready For War, In Fact, I'm Ready For More
As I 'Sport More Metals/Medals' Than Iron Man At The Espy Awards.

Pyzcho...Aka The Nigga You Dont Wanna Fuck With.

Hate Tears And 'Binds/Bynes' Through My Insides, Ripped 'Amanda's'-Face-Off! America's The Home Of Da 'Brave'? Only In Atlanta-Baseball...
So Haters Better Go To Church, The Devil Loves-To-Be-Mangled, But You Dont Need John Dye Just To Be Touched-By-An-Angel.

Oh Yes I'll Feed-Em-A-Shell, Clowning Like Kenan-And-Kel, The Justice System's So Corupted, You'd Find Jesus-In-Jail...
Get 'Dropped From My Flow', You Could Sky-Dive-Off-My-Punch-Lines, Cuz Every Line Is A Fuckin 'High-Light'-Like-The-'Sun-Shine'.

Yes I Keep Gunz, So Like Independent Women I Dont Let No Man-Stop-Me, And Like 'Circulating Humidity', Even My Dick Riding 'Fans'-Got-Heat...
There's Only One God So I'll Just Say That I'm The Master-Of-War, You Don't Get It? I'll 'Break It Down' Like When Some 'Glass-Hitz-The-Floor'.

You See I Stay On Top, Raps Like Ace-Of-Spades-In-A-Card-Game, Knives And Razor Blades'll Put Your 'Face To Your Chest' Like Flavor-Flav-With-That-Clock-Chain...
The Game Is So Fuckin Fragile, Dudes-Carry-All-Them-Lies, Now Watch As The Glass Is/Glasses Broke Like I Punched Drew-Carey-In-The-Eyes.

Done.

Pzycho Bka On RB DeTox,,..

[DeTox™]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ts-366955.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ne-366764.html

[ARMADA]

What It Do?!...

DeTox aKa Mr.Pyzschoo,,..

A Clever Dude That Severs You, See Me Coming, You Better Move
Or Get 'Fathered' Cuz A Daddy Is Something I Never Knew...
Testify! I'm Justified, Hope My Future Will Never Lie
Cuz Present Time's Been Memorized, Fix The Damage Like Pesticide.

the last line seems stretched but you said you do audio so
i guess you could pull it off, first two lines nice sharp multis

And These Snitches? They Tell Police, Get To Singing Like Della Reese
...'Jumped Off The Ledge', It's A 'Nightmare', I Hope I Just 'Fell Asleep'...
Hit The Ground But I Survive, My Family Prevents Me...
From Returning Home, Got My Own Family Against Me.

yer this is more geared to audio, text is a different beast fam,
gotta watch the meters, and the stressed syllables, read yours
then try this...

And These Snitches Tellin Police, Singing shit Like Della Reese
...'Jump Off a Ledge', A fucken 'Nightmare', Hopein I Just 'Fell Asleep'...

not saying change ya style, just showin you different way of thinking,
stressed amd unstressed syllables contribute to the flow of text

The World? I Entered It Crazy! Doctors Delivered A Baby...
That Would Insight Pain, Trigger Finger Bends/Benz Like Mercedes...
No This Isn't A Sick Gimic, Either Quit It Or Get With It
Here's A Quick Image...Kinda Nasty, Eat Rappers And Shit Lyrics.

lol like that> Eat Rappers And Shit Lyrics

Top 5 About Whose Ways Are Sick, Believe Me I Will Make The List
Can't Take My Shit, Only Time I 'Let My Seat Up' Is When I Take A Piss...
I Guess I'm Ready For War, In Fact, I'm Ready For More
As I 'Sport More Metals/Medals' Than Iron Man At The Espy Awards.

lol i just realized this is a battle/brag verse, i thought you were tellin a story


Pyzcho...Aka The Nigga You Dont Wanna Fuck With.

Hate Tears And 'Binds/Bynes' Through My Insides, Ripped 'Amanda's'-Face-Off! America's The Home Of Da 'Brave'? Only In Atlanta-Baseball...
So Haters Better Go To Church, The Devil Loves-To-Be-Mangled, But You Dont Need John Dye Just To Be Touched-By-An-Angel.

Oh Yes I'll Feed-Em-A-Shell, Clowning Like Kenan-And-Kel, The Justice System's So Corupted, You'd Find Jesus-In-Jail...
Get 'Dropped From My Flow', You Could Sky-Dive-Off-My-Punch-Lines, Cuz Every Line Is A Fuckin 'High-Light'-Like-The-'Sun-Shine'.

Yes I Keep Gunz, So Like Independent Women I Dont Let No Man-Stop-Me, And Like 'Circulating Humidity', Even My Dick Riding 'Fans'-Got-Heat...
There's Only One God So I'll Just Say That I'm The Master-Of-War, You Don't Get It? I'll 'Break It Down' Like When Some 'Glass-Hitz-The-Floor'.

You See I Stay On Top, Raps Like Ace-Of-Spades-In-A-Card-Game, Knives And Razor Blades'll Put Your 'Face To Your Chest' Like Flavor-Flav-With-That-Clock-Chain...
The Game Is So Fuckin Fragile, Dudes-Carry-All-Them-Lies, Now Watch As The Glass Is/Glasses Broke Like I Punched Drew-Carey-In-The-Eyes.


yerr there were some good hits in there,word play was good, but its
hard to find new wordplay these days, the "high light" simile was
one i havent seen, you might wanna check out the LLL leagues if
you havent already, o/a descent spit, and thanks for the reply on minez,
i left a message for you in my thread, bout the ending of the verse,
and the collab, stay up, keep it easy...peace

[DeTox™]

Good Lookn Out Fam,,.. Yea I Plan On Buyn A Mic & Gearn Myself To Audio More,,.. & Yea We Shud Definetely Do A Collab; I'll Hit U Up N PM..

[DeTox™]

Bump; Jus Warn Me If They Arent Allowed,,..

[sick flows fam]

Yo I don't need this link, so I wont go into detail...


Join LLL jr, learn the style. You've got potential.