requiem for a dream.

[Soule]

I seem to be falling again
only this time, not in love
today- I fall, my life numb
falling far away from failure

what I see is nothing new
a world of blue and green
spring paints a few leafs
a society that won't care

people that wish for the best
but refuse to work for success
so they dream about perfect
yet sleep in their own mess

I seem to be falling again
only this time, it's a dream
I'll kick and forever scream
until I finally open my eyes

clouds devour my thought
as I wonder about visions
it strikes me when I listen
to the realism of past nights

what I see today is sweet
one day- you want to quit
the next makes life exquisite
it's the requiem for a dream.

[Soule]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...im-366565.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-366622.html

[Ntalek]

I found this to be quite enjoyable..the topic was coo..but the way you approached the content was what made it good..I think you did a good job wording things in this..str8 to the point..not all abstract...basically a face value type of piece...and I felt that you did a good job pulling the reader into the read...and conveying the overall message behind his poem..good read....and could you RTF pls...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...us-366517.html

[Cody Nash]

this was dope. I liked it... lol. It's not that often I get to read your pieces because I'm lazy as fuck, but everytime I do read one they get either better or you're staying consistent. to me this is one of my favorites out of you... probably not my FAVORITE, but still one of them. I liked reading it... it flowed without any flaw... everything made sense in its own crazy way and you blew the topic away head on instead of being all insane about it. it was good. definitely a keeper... keep shit up.



- Nash

[Märtyr]

This is dope, i'll feed sometime soon.