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    Love is Dangerous

    Love is Dangerous
    By Spekz.



    Her perfect palm
    grasps mine gently,
    handcuffed.
    I don’t point fingers
    But how could I?
    I’ve fallen madly in love
    Go ahead, call me crazy
    …I would.
    When she sleeps
    I lay awake staring
    Visualizing each moment
    I’ve lost to hold you.
    But id give the world
    Actually
    I’ve been very selfish
    Since the day rings
    Placed us as one.
    Perhaps, im losing you
    Or worse; the love.
    No, that’s impossible
    Im so in love with you
    ….or atleast
    That’s what you tell me.

    I had a dream last night
    And she appeared.
    I woke up this morning
    cuddling with my cupid
    Arm around my neck
    With love?

    Let me tell you this…
    …Love is Dangerous.

    Last edited by Spekz.; April 19th, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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    Re: Love is Dangerous


    Not the ususal you most definately....I couldn't really grasp this piece...it seemed like there were no backbone to it..just a quick lil rant is what it seemed to be...there were a couple of grammatical errors that through me off a bit..this was a cool read...but definately something different and not the ususal you I've been seeing lately..but all in all cool read my dude..RTF pls......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...69#post6333069

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    Re: Love is Dangerous

    lol, i wrote this on break during one of my classes, outta boredom...i doubt i could recited ne lines from it even when i just finished....it as exactly what you called it....a quick lil rant

    ill get around to urs when i get back from class.

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