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    OG Poet, er some shit.
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    Pleased to make your acquaintance

    I find my mind stumbling over our future
    As you take my order and make my latte
    With such admirable delicacy
    That would give any broken man
    Ideas of making you, a part of me.
    For I’ve been on a bumpy road
    For 8 months or so now,
    And as I stutter a simple
    “th-th-th-thank you man”
    as you calmly pass
    my drink to my clammy palms,
    with a smile only a goddess could muster
    I realize so much about us.
    My pride and common sense are now long gone
    And as you softly wink at me
    While returning to your duties,
    I’ve already shoved a beautiful
    Bouquet of roses down my throat
    Just so I can speak sweet words when you return.
    You’ve taken the greens of my envy
    The reds of my anger
    The whites of my faith
    And the yellows and purples of my imagination
    And spun a web of enigmatic water colors
    That I would die to drown in
    While I sip my coffee in respect to how your soul
    Dances hand-in-hand so easily with my own.

    Problem is…
    We just met.
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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    Re: Pleased to make your acquaintance

    dang. now i remember why i stopped posting poetry on the net.
    sheesh.
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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    Re: Pleased to make your acquaintance

    I will get to this tomorrow at some point. You have my word. Late ass night, though. Off to sleep.
    Saved for feed. Return the favor when you can.
    "Dying Is An Art"
    -Sylvia Plath

    Not really. Save the song
    the sickle sings, we expire the same: lights out.
    -- Ross Gay, "Dying Is An Art"


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    Re: Pleased to make your acquaintance

    Links dude.


    You already know what I think about this piece.
    murder murder

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    Re: Pleased to make your acquaintance

    oh, the link rule.
    close this then, i dont even have time to check up on it really.
    Po'Ethics - Est. 2004




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    Re: Pleased to make your acquaintance

    thoughts so

    *job becomes easier*
    murder murder

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