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Hens is defending champ
hey 20?
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yea man, 20 is good. gl.
Monster's Ink
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ok, cleaned
both have till the end of today EST to post, no more extensions
Apparently..
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
Watch this dick be ignored and watch my thoughts maim and sever heads
And no my head ain't in the clouds but this IS your shortest rain ever hens
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
Your defences? I'm straight through, stomp this puff n' his gay crew
..they said I'm as white as a sheet so its only right I suffocate you
I'll break you now the tide's turned ya site turns bitch when their pride breaks
and they all laugh at their own jokes so I bet YOU make their sides ache
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
I'ma put my pedal to the metal coz it ain't hard to tar and trash ya stuff
So if this bitch is hard pushed.. then I didn't drive the car fast enough
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
This idiot's best of the bunch? this dunce ain't bestin this brawler
You're like the road to my house the way you're left in the corner
The cost of this shit can be pricey, if you think I'm skinny then bite me
Coz if I need to gain weight, the title heavy'll do nicely
Last edited by Erupt; April 19th, 2008 at 04:32 PM
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Originally Posted by COM
you can look at it like that...
But let's be real, that streak is garbage.
Yea, 8 in a row IS tight.. unless you had to lose 5 straight weeks to start it.
Ya techniques retarded. mail it in bitch, that style is gay.
If u try to envelop my skills. i'll wrap YOURS in a box, n' send em' miles away.
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at all.
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
As far as his personality, it's somethin many kids are callin' soft.
Ya fingers'd be horrible guardrails. they've never kept anything from fallin off.
Yield any violence? nah, your fate dies when i drop lines.
In real life? fuck the Octagon... id leave red on all 8 sides like a stop sign.
You ain't been nice for 3 years. any shit you spit is wack.
Fagot. Season 5 is like ya ex boyfriend... you'd do ANYTHING to get it back.
Ya fan clubs gone. RB won't look at what this fagot types.
Shit, i'll ghost for you bro.
... maybe then ppl will think ur good enough for BragginWrites.
sit
Monster's Ink
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Com
Apparently..
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
^^^DnD?? i don't even n play that game lol but i know about it
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
not harsh but funny as hell
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
idk why but when i read this i actually said meh out loud lol
i see where this was goin but just didn't like the execution
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
ROFL..took me a sec to get this one. i actually almost kept readin n skipped over it
Hens
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at all.
iight personal
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
2 in a row yea, but this one was creative. surprised i havent seen this concept before
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
undecided on this one...kinda confused me actually. just the wording was kinda awkward
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
niiice, good job wordin this as well
ok so i got...
Apparently..
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
vs
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at all.
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
ok so tied on quotables, BUT hens' first punch i barely quoted and also, his verse was waaaay too up n down for me. the start was meh, middle was fiya, n the last 4 bars i was just like wtf. iunno what happened, maybe i'm bein too picky or somethin tonight. hens def had the sluggers but imo com was a lot more consistent this round. so...
v/ Com
- King Tone
But let's be real, that streak is garbage.
Yea, 8 in a row IS tight.. unless you had to lose 5 straight weeks to start it.
lol, thats kinda funny.
Ya techniques retarded. mail it in bitch, that style is gay.
If u try to envelop my skills. i'll wrap YOURS in a box, n' send em' miles away.
eh
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at all.
lol, kinda cool
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
eh, decent
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
lol
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
seemed forced, but decent
As far as his personality, it's somethin many kids are callin' soft.
Ya fingers'd be horrible guardrails. they've never kept anything from fallin off.
lol
Yield any violence? nah, your fate dies when i drop lines.
In real life? fuck the Octagon... id leave red on all 8 sides like a stop sign.
eh
You ain't been nice for 3 years. any shit you spit is wack.
Fagot. Season 5 is like ya ex boyfriend... you'd do ANYTHING to get it back.
NICE
Ya fan clubs gone. RB won't look at what this fagot types.
Shit, i'll ghost for you bro.
... maybe then ppl will think ur good enough for BragginWrites.
eh
vs.
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
eh
Watch this dick be ignored and watch my thoughts maim and sever heads
And no my head ain't in the clouds but this IS your shortest rain ever hens
kinda coo'
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
lol
Your defences? I'm straight through, stomp this puff n' his gay crew
..they said I'm as white as a sheet so its only right I suffocate you
decent
I'll break you now the tide's turned ya site turns bitch when their pride breaks
and they all laugh at their own jokes so I bet YOU make their sides ache
decent
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
lol
I'ma put my pedal to the metal coz it ain't hard to tar and trash ya stuff
So if this bitch is hard pushed.. then I didn't drive the car fast enough
decent
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
nice
This idiot's best of the bunch? this dunce ain't bestin this brawler
You're like the road to my house the way you're left in the corner
eh, aight
The cost of this shit can be pricey, if you think I'm skinny then bite me
Coz if I need to gain weight, the title heavy'll do nicely
na...
this was pretty close. even though i think hens had the dopest punch of the battle with the season 5 ish, which was funny as fuck... i think com took it with a more well rounded verse. both verses were pretty solid, but com was just a little bit more consistent. i dont think neither of you dropped your full potential, but com edged it out.
vote - com
Apparently..
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
[meh]
Watch this dick be ignored and watch my thoughts maim and sever heads
And no my head ain't in the clouds but this IS your shortest rain ever hens
[meh/iight]
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
[meh]
Your defences? I'm straight through, stomp this puff n' his gay crew
..they said I'm as white as a sheet so its only right I suffocate you
[iight, kind of]
I'll break you now the tide's turned ya site turns bitch when their pride breaks
and they all laugh at their own jokes so I bet YOU make their sides ache
[iight i suppose]
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
[heh, not bad]
I'ma put my pedal to the metal coz it ain't hard to tar and trash ya stuff
So if this bitch is hard pushed.. then I didn't drive the car fast enough
[iight]
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
[decent]
This idiot's best of the bunch? this dunce ain't bestin this brawler
You're like the road to my house the way you're left in the corner
[came off kind of forced]
The cost of this shit can be pricey, if you think I'm skinny then bite me
Coz if I need to gain weight, the title heavy'll do nicely
[meh/iight]
vs
But let's be real, that streak is garbage.
Yea, 8 in a row IS tight.. unless you had to lose 5 straight weeks to start it.
[not bad, the personal was on point]
Ya techniques retarded. mail it in bitch, that style is gay.
If u try to envelop my skills. i'll wrap YOURS in a box, n' send em' miles away.
[heh, coolish]
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at
all.
[ha, funny cuz of the beef]
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
[starting to lose impact somewhat but still not bad]
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
[meh]
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
[cool]
As far as his personality, it's somethin many kids are callin' soft.
Ya fingers'd be horrible guardrails. they've never kept anything from fallin off.
[iight]
Yield any violence? nah, your fate dies when i drop lines.
In real life? fuck the Octagon... id leave red on all 8 sides like a stop sign.
[meh]
You ain't been nice for 3 years. any shit you spit is wack.
Fagot. Season 5 is like ya ex boyfriend... you'd do ANYTHING to get it back.
[iight]
Ya fan clubs gone. RB won't look at what this fagot types.
Shit, i'll ghost for you bro.
... maybe then ppl will think ur good enough for BragginWrites.
[meh/iight]
com started off kindof slow and i thought hens personals were effective
v/ hens
IJL
Apparently..
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
COOL W/PLAY
Watch this dick be ignored and watch my thoughts maim and sever heads
And no my head ain't in the clouds but this IS your shortest rain ever hens
PLAYED, DECENT FLIP BUT STILL
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
COOL
Your defences? I'm straight through, stomp this puff n' his gay crew
..they said I'm as white as a sheet so its only right I suffocate you
OK
I'll break you now the tide's turned ya site turns bitch when their pride breaks
and they all laugh at their own jokes so I bet YOU make their sides ache
NICE
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
HEH, OK
I'ma put my pedal to the metal coz it ain't hard to tar and trash ya stuff
So if this bitch is hard pushed.. then I didn't drive the car fast enough
GOOD IDEA, BUT IT WASNT A DISS AT HENS IMO
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
COOL
This idiot's best of the bunch? this dunce ain't bestin this brawler
You're like the road to my house the way you're left in the corner
COOL
The cost of this shit can be pricey, if you think I'm skinny then bite me
Coz if I need to gain weight, the title heavy'll do nicely
DECENT AGAIN
SOLID VERSE
VS
you can look at it like that...
But let's be real, that streak is garbage.
Yea, 8 in a row IS tight.. unless you had to lose 5 straight weeks to start it.
OK
Ya techniques retarded. mail it in bitch, that style is gay.
If u try to envelop my skills. i'll wrap YOURS in a box, n' send em' miles away.
OK
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at all.
COOL
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
OK
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
OK
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
NICE
As far as his personality, it's somethin many kids are callin' soft.
Ya fingers'd be horrible guardrails. they've never kept anything from fallin off.
COOL
Yield any violence? nah, your fate dies when i drop lines.
In real life? fuck the Octagon... id leave red on all 8 sides like a stop sign.
OK
You ain't been nice for 3 years. any shit you spit is wack.
Fagot. Season 5 is like ya ex boyfriend... you'd do ANYTHING to get it back.
ROFL
Ya fan clubs gone. RB won't look at what this fagot types.
Shit, i'll ghost for you bro.
... maybe then ppl will think ur good enough for BragginWrites.
NAH
HMM, HENS HAD A COUPLE OF VERY WITTY LINES, BUT ALSO A QUITE A FEW BASIC ONES WHICH LET HIM DOWN, COM HAD A COUPLE HAYMKERS TOO, BUT WHAT WON IT FOR HIM WAS THE REST OF HIS VERSE WAS CREATIVE, NOT ALL REAL HARD HITS BUT FOR THE MOST PART COM OUTDID JOHN HERE
V.COM
A.I
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Apparently..
...I'm into nerd games so I'm stabbing pricks with a sword
rolled a six then a four n' started dragon this bitch to the morgue
ehh
Watch this dick be ignored and watch my thoughts maim and sever heads
And no my head ain't in the clouds but this IS your shortest rain ever hens
coo
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
mehh
Your defences? I'm straight through, stomp this puff n' his gay crew
..they said I'm as white as a sheet so its only right I suffocate you
nice
I'll break you now the tide's turned ya site turns bitch when their pride breaks
and they all laugh at their own jokes so I bet YOU make their sides ache
lol
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
nice
I'ma put my pedal to the metal coz it ain't hard to tar and trash ya stuff
So if this bitch is hard pushed.. then I didn't drive the car fast enough
coo but worded wierd iono
You bluffed coz your text is sucking, bitch I ain't impressed at nuthin
Whoever said you were the shit... must have had Tourette's or sumthin
coo
This idiot's best of the bunch? this dunce ain't bestin this brawler
You're like the road to my house the way you're left in the corner
ok
The cost of this shit can be pricey, if you think I'm skinny then bite me
Coz if I need to gain weight, the title heavy'll do nicely
mehh @ best
vs
But let's be real, that streak is garbage.
Yea, 8 in a row IS tight.. unless you had to lose 5 straight weeks to start it.
ok
Ya techniques retarded. mail it in bitch, that style is gay.
If u try to envelop my skills. i'll wrap YOURS in a box, n' send em' miles away.
ehh ok
Get control of yourself, otherwise this fag's gonna fall.
The only grip you have on life.. is the dude who proved ya don't have one at all.
lol
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
ok coo
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
lmfao
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
nice
As far as his personality, it's somethin many kids are callin' soft.
Ya fingers'd be horrible guardrails. they've never kept anything from fallin off.
nice
Yield any violence? nah, your fate dies when i drop lines.
In real life? fuck the Octagon... id leave red on all 8 sides like a stop sign.
okish
You ain't been nice for 3 years. any shit you spit is wack.
Fagot. Season 5 is like ya ex boyfriend... you'd do ANYTHING to get it back.
lol
Ya fan clubs gone. RB won't look at what this fagot types.
Shit, i'll ghost for you bro.
... maybe then ppl will think ur good enough for BragginWrites.
nah
overall- good match, both dropped pretty witty n had some cool punches, but john had the sting in some of his punches a lil more....very close tho
v/ J.Hens
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http://board.rap.music.com/showpost.php?p=13188751&postcount=8Still causin static kid, everyone loves my lines too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same Reception as ONE of mine do.
i think recycling word for word counts as -2 points? oops.
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hmmm yeah that'll have to be Hens -2 votes I'm afraid
3-0 Com
But john won't travel or reflect coz he aint type to act and move on it
This fucking dudes so withdrawn if he wants to find himself he'll google it
I'll break you now the tide's turned ya site turns bitch when their pride breaks
and they all laugh at their own jokes so I bet YOU make their sides ache
^^hah
Wont be no need for a tiebreak coz I can see this sad bitch's smitten
See John's in a loving relationship, it's just too bad his girlfriend isn't
nothing bad about the verse, all good wording etc., but those were the only standout ones
vs.
BragginWrites knows, COM is wack and can't spit.
I haven't seen someone clowned by Kungfu that bad since the last Jackie Chan flick.
^^haha, nice
You're not top 5 anymore. verses r a crime i can't try to patrol.
Fuck Shocking. ya wack lines got police tasers askin you for tips on riot control.
^^hehe
I'm causin static, it's no surprise people love my lines, too.
An'tenna ya verses can't get the same fuckin' Reception that ONE of mine do.
^^yeah I've been shown that it's recycled so I gotta deduct the votes, but to me this was fresh and creative
As far as his personality, it's somethin many kids are callin' soft.
Ya fingers'd be horrible guardrails. they've never kept anything from fallin off.
^^nice
You ain't been nice for 3 years. any shit you spit is wack.
Fagot. Season 5 is like ya ex boyfriend... you'd do ANYTHING to get it back.
^^heh aight
opener wasnt that harsh cos he no showed most of those, grip on life was poorly worded cos it doesnt work both ways, I mean you dont say he has a Grip (name) on life
Com had too many threat punches which aint as hard to me meaning threat punches needa more witty or funny to hit hard imo, drag to the morgue, suffocate etc. closer wasnt even a diss really, the title will do nicely is just a statement. Felt Hens came harsher
v/Hens
ok so 3-1
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