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    Yes

    Yes.
    I do love you
    Your perfect looks...(?)
    The language my last love never knew
    The moments we share
    forever new.
    I love you back
    I love the confusion
    hope for the negative, prayer.
    the fusion.
    I'm turning every page,
    lifting all stones
    I know the love's there
    Somewhere.
    Not knowing if i dread or anticipate
    my brain is numb with thinking
    My thumb is lonlier, the Index is siamesed to the Ring
    I cross them somewhat purposelessly
    Tightly still.
    There's nothing i feel.
    What will become of my present?
    The hearts that lay in wait in my presence
    and i play wait with them
    a little healing at the touch of my hem.
    A little flirting,
    a little birth, a little murder
    and the evil game just jazz's me.
    knowing we're messing each other.
    Im looking, in here, harder
    I pray I'll find love in the rabbles
    Kneel and give it to you
    Ignoring your short hair
    sounds you make that i hate
    modest pride when they call you 'player'
    The pursuits are sweet, makes you ache.
    Its a season,
    the Wise say.
    God's voice of reason.
    beauty passes away
    ' I love you.'
    Keep my finger and yours pressed
    that that's what I'll say.

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    Re: Yes

    Wow, this is just amazing. It relates so wonderfully to what I'm going through right now with a beautiful girl I broke up with not more than two weeks ago. I mean, it's astounding really. It almost feels like she's talking to me, like this is what I wish she would say to me. I'm very rarely, if ever, moved so much by words and connected to a writer. You have such an real and daunting poetic voice, it just feels heavier and stronger the more I read it. It's great. I'm so curious, please let me know the story of this.
    murder murder

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    Re: Yes

    Thanks ex. i think a poem is prismal. you can look at evry face and still see a an entity of truth.

    by best friend think she in love wit me. i hope I am.

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    Re: Yes

    Its my first thread on the forum, I'd appreciate feeds on this one please.

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