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April 14th, 2008, 11:19 AM
#1
as ain't
Yes
Yes.
I do love you
Your perfect looks...(?)
The language my last love never knew
The moments we share
forever new.
I love you back
I love the confusion
hope for the negative, prayer.
the fusion.
I'm turning every page,
lifting all stones
I know the love's there
Somewhere.
Not knowing if i dread or anticipate
my brain is numb with thinking
My thumb is lonlier, the Index is siamesed to the Ring
I cross them somewhat purposelessly
Tightly still.
There's nothing i feel.
What will become of my present?
The hearts that lay in wait in my presence
and i play wait with them
a little healing at the touch of my hem.
A little flirting,
a little birth, a little murder
and the evil game just jazz's me.
knowing we're messing each other.
Im looking, in here, harder
I pray I'll find love in the rabbles
Kneel and give it to you
Ignoring your short hair
sounds you make that i hate
modest pride when they call you 'player'
The pursuits are sweet, makes you ache.
Its a season,
the Wise say.
God's voice of reason.
beauty passes away
' I love you.'
Keep my finger and yours pressed
that that's what I'll say.
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April 14th, 2008, 11:26 AM
#2
as ain't
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April 14th, 2008, 12:26 PM
#3
better than legendary
Re: Yes
Wow, this is just amazing. It relates so wonderfully to what I'm going through right now with a beautiful girl I broke up with not more than two weeks ago. I mean, it's astounding really. It almost feels like she's talking to me, like this is what I wish she would say to me. I'm very rarely, if ever, moved so much by words and connected to a writer. You have such an real and daunting poetic voice, it just feels heavier and stronger the more I read it. It's great. I'm so curious, please let me know the story of this.
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April 15th, 2008, 08:19 AM
#4
as ain't
Re: Yes
Thanks ex. i think a poem is prismal. you can look at evry face and still see a an entity of truth.
by best friend think she in love wit me. i hope I am.
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April 21st, 2008, 05:56 AM
#5
as ain't
Re: Yes
Its my first thread on the forum, I'd appreciate feeds on this one please.
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