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    I Am Truth

    I am Truth
    A Series of freewrites



    I pride myself on being the exile
    Am I the god of reason?
    A Bleeding heart pumping hard on the inside
    Living in a cave of treason
    Cut me deeper, Society
    Betray your fathers second son
    Cool Kids Crush Sobriety
    Seems the name of the game
    I Find myself living on the outside
    Treacherous board pieces
    Raising up the skirt of a ghost town
    Sly with their movement
    Searching for something to hold on to
    The serpents slither past
    Brown eyes never were so strained
    A withered soul, sick from his own thoughts
    I fathom a fair tale heaven
    I feel as he feels And within my eyes the bluest of tears
    Where High school kids stay out past eleven
    Drain my body of raw emotion
    And say hey to thee weird guy
    The man, downed by evil serpents is humanity
    My hair swings in the air
    Which in this age of insanity
    Brain cells flee without a care
    Calls the beaten
    Raw and Reckless abandon
    Cave of treason Its only home

    Truth is shrouded
    In the darkest of hells
    Red eyed demons guarding its cage
    Wrapped In Chains
    warmed by the steams of oblivion
    It sits
    Truth waits to be unleashed
    And to live rightfully
    amidst the Righteous and pure
    Yet always it is stopped
    by the dastardly Devil
    And as punishment
    Carnage is impressed on his flesh
    His scars are beauty marks
    An untold tale of won freedom
    All seems so sad, does it not?
    Truth has been absent for some while
    And as the harmed souls beckons
    Truths courage grows
    To raise like a long forgotten phoenix
    And Devour his wicked foes



    In hell there is beauty, we grow from the pain

    Always remember that enduring hardship is earning wisdom
    Many a soul cower in the darkness of the world

    Though few ever stand to the strenuous tasks before them
    Rarely will you get every thing you want
    Unfortunately it takes thins happenings to build Character
    That is the complete Truth
    Hopefully it helped

    I Am Truth


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    Re: I Am Truth

    First two links get immediate feedback.

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ed-365745.html

    This was a very interesting piece dude. I liked it quite a bit. You're wording was pretty cool, and the whole formatted style was something new... though done better by Kevin Brown.. you still pulled it off quite well with this concept. Emotion was straight, better then most work out in PS nowadays. Imagery was pretty damn visual.. liked it, keep writing.

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    Thanks bell, and actully i did that format before Kev did up for more votes i will rtf

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    yeah this was a cool lil piece here..in the beginning IDK if it was how I was reading it but it seemed a bit random in certain parts..it didn't really hit me until the red stanza and then ending..but overall this was nicely executed...the format/structure was akward..but hey to each it's own..but I found this piece to be an enjoyable read after all..so props on that..and pls RTF on my piece Eye Am. ft Lecomp...

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