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    The Other Side


    The Other Side: My Reflection
    By:Spekz



    Footsteps waltz darkness
    Over less than inviting
    Sands. Riverbanks invest work
    Stamped on the hands of the used.
    Souls stripped, they work by force
    And live in the state of mind.

    Allow the river waters to flow
    Washing away reality.


    Gentle serenity embraces feet
    Anchored in pebbled floors.
    Nature strokes; a subtle macerate skin
    Where what lies beneath the surface
    Flows the incantation of heaven.
    …beauty.

    Above the horizon reflects
    a worn existence.


    Charcoil ashed humanity wades
    Reluctant; Paced at heart with sorrow
    Woven carriages become collective
    Hats, shading the eyes of labor.
    Tainted sight looks a hue of loss
    Fading to a kept self, meshed with fear
    Stares inspect the portrait eyeing back.
    But perfection remains hidden
    Weary lives live on the side of reality.

    Below the horizon rests
    The opposition of this life.


    Nights wake no sleep
    Eyes shut hiding silent cries
    Praying for a promise
    To shoot hope by the stars
    Wishes taunt them to fall
    But above the river only
    Flows eternal hurt.

    If only I could hide under
    The clear water springs.
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    Re: The Other Side

    haha, i just realized that this has the same name as cry's piece

    ugh, what can you do....

    pity me perhaps lol
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    Re: The Other Side

    Um...hello.

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    will edit with feed sonz.
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    Re: The Other Side

    I love this poem! You provided an excellent use of vocab. I felt alot of emotion when i read this poem. It made me think of times i wish i could go somewhere and hide. It was also a good length, not too little, not too much. Perfect to get the point accross.

    It could've flowed in the verses just a lil better, but it was great!

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    ^Thanks princezz..for the good feed

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    Anytime, i havent posted in months. Just got back on but be looking out for me!

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    Upping cuz im b.o.r.e.d!
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