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    Bulletproof Aphrodite










    Bulletproof Aphrodite



    Burden
    Truth
    Vincible


    The room shakes with silence,
    A western style standoff without the fatal weapons.
    I'm the tormentor apparent.
    The obvious heir to Satan's throne;
    Or so I'm repeatedly told.
    She cringes at me with those beautiful eyes,
    Don't do it.. please..
    I refuse, it's not a choice
    It's a way of life.
    The wounds I inflict don't show,
    Experience; I make sure of that.
    Like a wave she crashes
    To the ground with an air of resignation.
    Forcing her legs apart,
    My fresh breath envelops her.
    The beautiful stench of whiskey
    Is forced into her cute mouth.
    I usually move quick;
    Fists balling like the kids are.
    My heart beats triumphantly,
    I'm so sorry dear; it's what I crave.
    Crushing your pretty skull with a flicker
    Of my heavily tattooed arm.
    At least now you may sleep...




    Smeared black Ink scripts the violence
    I remember my actions, abuse at its worse
    as i cursed
    i proceeded to trash a love held sacred
    And scarred you deeply
    with the essence of a ten second feud
    I may have sparked a spiritual revolution
    I see Floods of hate rolling in
    You dream of sin, i am so weak in your mind
    Fantasies of getting even
    they will consume you whole
    Honey, you can remain cold
    but me but stick by my side
    at least allow a broken poet
    to make good on a withered promise
    I will one day do right by you
    and there will be no more running mascara
    leaking in to my own sea of Alcohol
    And swollen lips will be instead kissed
    My love burns eternal,
    I'm just sorry that the brander
    left its mark on you
    Smeared black ink scripts the violence
    something I'm attempting to undo



    Dear John,
    I hit you and you hit me back
    blood trickles from my nose
    you expose the inner workings
    of a battered psyche, without you
    I don't have a life, without you
    I'd rather die, my shining knight
    It seems your biggest fight
    is with me, you no longer
    slay my dragons you slay me
    to you our love is a chess match
    the shards of my heart multiply
    now these tearducts are empty
    you're yet to break your cocoon
    you'll never be my butterfly
    our love died, everything you said
    was an utter lie
    the well ran dry
    your Aphrodite no longer beautified
    my beau losing all valor

    Dear Jane,
    you're the antagonist of my suicide notes
    another suicidal hoax, hated by your folks
    if I could I'd kiss your scar tissues
    let you cry in my embrace, tears of joy
    and fear that I'll change
    See you in your casket and not care
    your ailments are inferior
    I hate you for the blasted bitch you are
    I use to dazzle you with chivalry
    now you chastise and belittle me
    add a surplus of insults to injury
    I love you more than I know
    your forgiving heart is my oasis
    your love is BEAUTIFUL AND WASTED
    so I guess this is Goodbye
    Last edited by Dayvid Aimz; April 6th, 2008 at 02:10 AM Reason: Styling.

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    Re: Bulletproof Aphrodite

    Well...well we have 3 very artistic heads in one collab and
    I didn't expect anything less than fireworks and viola!!!!
    The fluidity of this piece is what really Impressed me the
    most. It was easy to follow and had a simplistic elegance
    to it as well. It was still solid nonetheless and was very
    entertaining.The emotion was evident all the verses
    and imagery vivid Each of your unique styles blended
    n Perfectly. Thanks for this read my dudes.

    When you get time check out "Generations" collab

    - Tific
    Last edited by Soul Slayer; April 6th, 2008 at 09:02 AM

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    Re: Bulletproof Aphrodite

    Links please.
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    Re: Bulletproof Aphrodite

    uppin # 1..................................

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    Re: Bulletproof Aphrodite

    wow folks. this piece is heavy.
    I like how you used simple language. i think poetry is about communicating big meanings in small words. easily enjoyable pieces. and this was one.
    i liked the first verse most. Started up realy high and the feelin was maitained. third verse was very creative. props.

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